Evening Delight

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evening delight whimsical hide and seek ~ skittish fireflies submitted on Jun 14, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S SELECT G sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - HONORABLE MENTION originally posted on June 14, 2020

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/16/2020 7:26:00 PM

And oh how we chased them! <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/16/2020 10:37:00 PM

what a charming memory ~

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/14/2020 9:50:00 PM

They are beautiful. I like how you poeticized them Line.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2020 7:51:00 PM

'skittish fireflies' -- They certainly are evasive, those lamplighters. Two thumbs way up on this haiku, Line! Thanks, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2020 12:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Gershon. Most appreciated.

John Watt

Date: 6/14/2020 6:07:00 PM

It is one of my life regrets that I am 60 years old and have never seen a firefly. They just don't exist in my region, and I don't travel enough to have seen them elsewhere. They sound magical. Love your haiku. Blessings ~ John

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/15/2020 12:35:00 AM

Thanks, John. Sometimes we have to be satisfied with vicarious pleasures ~