Evening Concert

Hot day slowly fades
insects gathering at dusk
summer symphony
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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May 5, 2013 at 7:16 AM
Good morning, Robin, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy your wonderful day. Always & Forever! **LINDA**
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April 29, 2013 at 1:23 AM
Very very nice, I so much enjoyed reading this.
Haniff Avatar
January 17, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Nice haiku.....I just enjoy reading your poetry soo much!....thanx for the comment.....love Maryam
Heck Avatar
December 5, 2008 at 3:16 PM
Crickets serenading in the moonlight - a crescendo of nature's harmony. A lovely haiku to balance winter's chill. Peace always and have a Happy & Healthy Holiday season. John
Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 4, 2008 at 5:20 PM
The sound of violins and crickets... lovely piece! Love, Keith
Lopez Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 8:37 PM
this is the music that I end my day to when i go fishing . love the haiku ..........this is my favorite form of poetry. very nice.
Fawcett Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 1:01 AM
This is a lovely warm poem to read while the rain, snow, hail, and wind slowly try to demolish my house. Great stuff. Love, Nigel
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December 1, 2008 at 12:23 PM
this makes me want hot days to return. a great piece you wrote here. thank you for reading my little boy searching and for your comment
Rhinem Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 8:39 PM
Smile:) I see a little humor in here dear lady! "Hello Again Precious Robin!"~You must live in the southern lands? It reminds me of To Kill A Mockingbird or something such~But I don't know why? Smile~I hope you Sunday evening is going beautifully for you dear lady, and, as always, I enjoyed your write!~"Sweet Dreams Dear~Love Always To You & All You Love, John!"~Bye Lovely Robin!:)
Winter Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 4:45 PM
Well, it's too cold here now, but a few months ago I could hear them all out my window. And they can be loud! Love, Shar
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November 30, 2008 at 3:39 PM
Especially the crickets--they sure can make a lot of music. The last line pulls this piece together. Nice job. I enjoyed it. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing. Karen
Neal Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 2:17 PM
Nice 5-7-5 flow. This is an excellent write
Bickerstaffe Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 2:07 PM
Beautiful imagery Robin! Neat flow and geat 'd' and 's' alliteration... Love Keith
Moreno Avatar
November 30, 2008 at 1:25 PM
Nice title and context. You are a natural at this. I enjoyed this haiku...Raul
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