Evening Begins

The evening begins the sky has darkened
A full moon is shining bright
With the bright stars glitters
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Valles Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 3:03 PM
Darlene, a wonderful Kimo! I need to try this form. Excellent work my friend. Your poem entices the reader into soothing evening scenes. It's great!
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May 20, 2026 at 11:08 AM
Hello Tom Vales I think you should try this form my friend. Yes your right this poem is exactly what I wanted my poem to be. Thank you for this wonderful comment. Your friend,/ Darlene/
Croft Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 8:19 AM
Very nice
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 16, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Hello Karen Croft, Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Kendrick Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 5:18 AM
Creative lines penned. Way to go. Sara K
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 7:09 AM
Hello Sara, Hi! Thank you for this wonderful comment. Hugs. Darlene
Gifford Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 10:49 AM
You have painted a beautifully romantic scene, Darlene. An excellent write. Loved it. Have a great day, my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 11:38 AM
Hello Zyrool, i commented on your poem of the week. Thank you for this wonderful comment. You enjoy your day to . My fiend /Darlene/Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Love writing kimos. These short poems are like delightful journal entries. Sweet :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 3:56 PM
Hello Kim, I like writng them to. I changer arloujnd. with the poetry forms. Hugs. /darlene/
Kerr Avatar
October 7, 2025 at 1:41 PM
Hi Darlene, You have written an exquisite poem. It’s an elegant piece of beautiful contrasts and imaginative word choices. Thanks for your comment on Scents Of Autumn. I’m pleased to meet you as well Howard
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October 7, 2025 at 2:54 PM
Hello Howard Kent, Howard, thank you for this wonderful comment. It made my day brighter. Your welcome. i enjoyed to read your poem. I am pleased to meetyou. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
Greenhough Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:12 AM
Your words paint a lovely picture. I enjoy such an evening.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Hello Hilda, I could not comment on your comment to me because I goofed. So this is my second time. Thank you for your wonderful comment. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your welcome for the fav. I never did understand a complex -poem. So I avoid them.Thank you for this compliment. Hugs. /Darlene/
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September 19, 2025 at 6:13 PM
Hi Darlene, You created a perfect poetic cocktail, that is simply mesmer Thank you for this FAV. ….Complex poems, I avoid, as though another poet is trying to impress me. And doing so they lose me., I would rather enjoy something I can relate to. Like your poetry.!! “ Pangie”
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September 20, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you for the lovely comment. Your welcome for the fav. I never did understand a complex -poem. So I avoid them.Thank you for this compliment. Hugs. /Darlene/
Sands Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 6:35 AM
A beautiful evening you have described Darlene. Very nice. I love to see the moon and stars :)
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September 19, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Hello Heidi, every evening i go to the window to view the sky. My fav. moon is the full moon.With the bright shinny stars. I look for the bright star and make a wish. Hugs. /Darlene/
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September 16, 2025 at 5:53 PM
A perfect mood, a perfect night. Very lovely. Never alone when so many bright stars for company. I love to sit quietly, and just star gaze. Magical in a way. Have a great evening my friend!
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September 17, 2025 at 10:45 AM
Hello Joe Dimino, I enjoy to gaze up at the stars. Yes it is peaceful. My fav. moon is the full moon. I see a fAce and a smile. Every time the full moon appears. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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September 15, 2025 at 8:39 PM
This is simple and peaceful. The imagery of the moon and stars captures the calm beauty of evening. Thank you for sharing this with us.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 17, 2025 at 10:41 AM
Hello Krishika, so nice to meet you. your welcome. I felt peaceful when creting this poem. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
Buhagiar Avatar
September 13, 2025 at 10:00 PM
Lovely written Kimo, Darlene. Don't trust anyone at night.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 14, 2025 at 10:57 AM
Hello Victor, Yes that is right, I agree with you. I won't trust anyone at night. enjoy y9uor day my friend. /Darlene/
Cunningham Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 8:37 AM
Nothing more beautiful than the night sky Darlene, the wonders of creation. Tom
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September 11, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Hello Tom, Yes the it is wonderful at night. When the moon shines with the stars. A beautiful creation. .Enjoy your day my friend. /,Darlene/
Rodrigues Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 7:10 AM
A lovely evening indeed!
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 11, 2025 at 11:13 AM
Hello Kim, yes a lovely evening does begins. Hugs. /Darlene/
Rodgers Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 7:42 AM
Dear Darlene, such a peaceful, serene moment! There's something so calming about the way you've painted this evening scene for it feels like taking a deep breath and settling into the quiet beauty of nightfall. Blessings, Darlene, Daniel
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September 9, 2025 at 10:18 AM
Hello Daniel Henry Rodgers, I felt peaceful when creating this poem. I am pleased this poem has an effect 0on you this way. Blessings Daniel. thank you for this wonderful comment. blessings Daniel/ Darlene/
Sharma Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 8:06 PM
A night time of beauty and elegance.....
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:20 AM
Hello Dr. Vandana Sharma, yes lots of beauty. Elegance with the stars. Hugs. /Darlene/
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September 8, 2025 at 5:53 PM
you did a beautiful job with the Kimo form. I enjoyed reading your poem....hugs, Sara
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 9, 2025 at 10:21 AM
Hello Sara, thank you Sara. Hugs. enjoy your4 day. /Darlene/
Goldsmith Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:39 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely write. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day writing away..............
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Hello Paula, , Thank you Paula. I will enjoy to write away. . Hugs. /Darlene/
Andresen Avatar
September 8, 2025 at 1:18 PM
- A beautiful evening to enjoy, Darlene :) - hugs
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September 8, 2025 at 2:12 PM
hello Anne Lisa Andersen, yes it wouilde be an enjoyable evening to behold. Hugs. /Darlene/ thank you for y0ur lovely comment.
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