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Evening A Rose

"...ashes to ashes, dust to dust..."
Adam was created as a form of God's trust.
Ribs are on the table and Eve's heart just.
Eden is the garden that the Word loves most.

Thoracic cage, it was given a name
References made said a serpent came
Using Eve to conceive, the word Shame.
Eden was the garden where first, we blamed.

Father forgiven it was truthfully written.
"... go forth and learn to play..."
Banishment He said
"...is a waste of my six great days!"

Punishment, the illusion of bad management,
and Judgement, the pollution of a sad intent,
scrambled an image, of the Heavenly scent.
Tumble weeds humble and She stands defiant.

The knowledge of good and evil is free
"... go do and live...." God said, as WE
"... be fruitful, multiply, share and give..."
"... 24 ribs each, are a measure of my love..."

Then His kisses became the stars above.

Worp drive! Atom scribed on the parchment,
Ophi wrote on as a loop in the constant.elation!
88 in the air sharing blissful conversation
"... god has a method you know, 
of cosmic operation..."  they said.

Eden is the garden where first we heard.
God is the promise that Nature comes first.
"... I don't waste..." was the verse it chose
"I'm god after all, and I can change your knows."
So to write His story, the Eve became a Rose.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/30/2010 9:20:00 AM
Izzy i havent been on PS for so long.I missed your poetry !! Your still one of the best
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:39:00 AM
Good one Izzy, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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