Evening

Embers burning low now
Every creature yawning
Even the little mouse
Evening draws curtains close
Eyes flutter and then shut
Ewes jump fences quickly
Easily lulled to sleep



This is meant to be a Pleiades, but I didn't see the form as an option.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 8:57 PM
Well done loved this one!
Nance Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Very neat pleiades. :) good job.
Smith Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 4:07 AM
This a perfect Pleiades. Very well done...when I did one I put it as a list.....Tim
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