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Evenfall

beautiful is evenfall when sky begins to blaze and clouds appear as plush pillows floating persimmon on a comforter with rich threads of burnt sienna and scarlet interlaced draped over my valley May 15, 2020 title chosen: Option 2: Evenfall for the 'Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto -' Poetry Contest of Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/28/2020 2:27:00 PM

Back with congratulations for yet another win with this awesome Yalto, Andrea:-)

Eve Roper

Date: 5/22/2020 2:13:00 AM

Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/20/2020 3:12:00 PM

Of course I will visit you Andrea. I would have loved to see this poem in first place. Congratulations on your second placement my friend! xxoo

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/20/2020 1:47:00 PM

This is so creative, Andrea. The metaphor of a bed with a colorful quilt "draped over my valley" is so well done. This is one of my favs from you! Wonderful! Congratulations on your winning placement.

John Watt

Date: 5/20/2020 10:30:00 AM

Enjoyed your colors of eventide and your soothing words floating on the clouds of dusk. Congrats, my friend!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 5/20/2020 8:03:00 AM

The beauty and softness of plush pillows is beautiful! Congratulations on your recurring win Andrea :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/20/2020 7:43:00 AM

What lovely imagery, crisp and flowing! This one is a fave for me! Congratulations, Andrea!

Edward Ibeh

Date: 5/20/2020 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win in my contest, Andrea:-) Your fabulous Yalto is filled with wonderfully vivid imagery!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 5/18/2020 7:58:00 AM

Such a glorious visionary non plight ...beautiful insightful thank you for sharing... imagery wonders that wonder just beautiful imaginings. James. :D [Write On!!! ]

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/18/2020 1:43:00 AM

Wow Andrea, is this what my daughter has to look forward to? She will love it! I look forward to visiting one day maybe next year, depending on the pandemic. I loved this beauty. A winner for sure! Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/18/2020 4:01:00 PM

yes, sometimes the twilights can look like this!! I am sure in every region we can see them this way at least once in a while. Thanks, Connie and I hope you come visit me one day.