Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Evenfall

beautiful
is evenfall
when sky 
begins to blaze
and clouds appear as
plush pillows
floating
persimmon
on a 
comforter
with rich threads
of burnt sienna
and scarlet interlaced
draped 
over my valley

May 15, 2020 
title chosen: Option 2: Evenfall
for the 'Pick-A-Title, Vol 17 - Yalto -' Poetry Contest of Edward Ibeh

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Edward Ibeh May 28, 2020 at 2:27 PM Back with congratulations for yet another win with this awesome Yalto, Andrea:-)

Eve Roper May 22, 2020 at 2:13 AM Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong May 20, 2020 at 3:12 PM Of course I will visit you Andrea. I would have loved to see this poem in first place. Congratulations on your second placement my friend! xxoo

Sam Kauffman May 20, 2020 at 1:47 PM This is so creative, Andrea. The metaphor of a bed with a colorful quilt "draped over my valley" is so well done. This is one of my favs from you! Wonderful! Congratulations on your winning placement.

John Watt May 20, 2020 at 10:30 AM Enjoyed your colors of eventide and your soothing words floating on the clouds of dusk. Congrats, my friend!

Aditi Mishra May 20, 2020 at 8:03 AM The beauty and softness of plush pillows is beautiful! Congratulations on your recurring win Andrea :)

Kim Rodrigues May 20, 2020 at 7:43 AM What lovely imagery, crisp and flowing! This one is a fave for me! Congratulations, Andrea!

Edward Ibeh May 20, 2020 at 6:30 AM Congratulations on your fine win in my contest, Andrea:-) Your fabulous Yalto is filled with wonderfully vivid imagery!

James Edward Lee Sr. May 18, 2020 at 7:58 AM Such a glorious visionary non plight ...beautiful insightful thank you for sharing... imagery wonders that wonder just beautiful imaginings. James. :D [Write On!!! ]

Connie Marcum Wong May 18, 2020 at 1:43 AM Wow Andrea, is this what my daughter has to look forward to? She will love it! I look forward to visiting one day maybe next year, depending on the pandemic. I loved this beauty. A winner for sure! Blessings xxoo Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2020 at 4:01 PM yes, sometimes the twilights can look like this!! I am sure in every region we can see them this way at least once in a while. Thanks, Connie and I hope you come visit me one day.

Frederic Parker May 16, 2020 at 8:23 AM a lush painting so vivid

John Lawless May 16, 2020 at 7:33 AM A quilt like beauty Andrea

Vijay Pandit May 16, 2020 at 6:49 AM Beautiful imagery Andrea...burnt sienna and scarlet interlaced draped over my alley..so well described!

Caren Krutsinger May 16, 2020 at 6:43 AM This reminds me of majesty and imagery magic.

Jenish Somadas May 16, 2020 at 3:12 AM Sweet and lovely lines Andrea..Good luck..

Michael Tor May 16, 2020 at 2:48 AM Love these special words that create such picturesque beauty.

Eve Roper May 15, 2020 at 9:59 PM oh, I love the color mixture, great imagery. Good luck hugs eve

David Mohn May 15, 2020 at 9:52 PM how soft and lush your descriptions are Andrea...lovely

Tom Cunningham May 15, 2020 at 5:09 PM I just love those stunning sunsets Andrea, the sky ablaze with colour. Tom

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 15, 2020 at 5:01 PM Swoon. Falling into your poem...

Jan Allison May 15, 2020 at 4:54 PM gorgeous imagery Andrea, I too chose this theme, good luck:-) hugs jan xx