Debbie Guzzi Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Even the Mistakes

so hard to see me
the inside is not out
the trials and sorrows hidden
respect gained the hard way
never the easy way, no

a reverence for wit
an easy kindness gifted
deep set eyes shining
full of affection ever

before the love
comes the like
but I love

love all
even mistakes

love

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Lucilla Carrillo August 9, 2013 at 9:46 AM This is a great poem Debbie; We all make mistakes. When we learn to love them - it's because we have learned from them. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Sara Kendrick August 8, 2013 at 10:59 AM Sometimes it is hard to come to terms with mistakes but it is good that you have and have even learned to love them..Thanks for stopping by my "Eerie Green"..The One Cloud is a wonderful Cloud..Sara

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2013 at 8:58 AM 'Debbie, I love your message here. But is it ok to do by word number instead of syllable count? I hope I got the rules right on this form! Let me see your other one now.