Even the Dogs Are Dreaming Now

Even the dogs are dreaming now                                                                                                               Their tails Waging against the hardwood floor                                                                                   I en-vie them their sleep                                                                                                               For my dreams have locked me out                                                                                                As I sit here looking for answers to the big picture                                                                                        And in the darkness of the night I remember                                                                                             What it was like as a child falling asleep                                                                                          To the sound of my parents watching the Naked City                                                                     On the black and white T.V. down the hall                                                                                                           So long ago and far away

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Date: 8/24/2013 5:16:00 PM
Nostalgia can often keep a weary soul from sleep, but to sit and watch a loved one dream, even if they are just a dog or cat, can be comforting in a way that is both unexplainable and sentimental.
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Date: 5/29/2013 11:05:00 PM
I'm not from your generation so I'm not familiar with the movie reference. But the way you expressed yourself made me feel like I was there... the dog dreaming was an interesting tool for conveying the nostalgic quality to this. (I wonder what in the world they dream about, besides open fields and cats?).
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Date: 5/18/2013 5:12:00 PM
Michael, I see you write a lot about dreaming. Dreams are indeed a key to our lives. I have read several of the recent works of yours and have enjoyed them very much. You have a marvelous touch!
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/18/2016 8:57:00 AM
Date: 5/15/2013 7:36:00 PM
Great piece, you brought me back in time. We must be a similar age. I remember front page challenge and gun smoke on my parents black and white.
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Michael Ainsley
Date: 8/24/2016 10:22:00 PM
indeed I remember all of these. I won't mention our age if you don't!
Date: 5/14/2013 10:14:00 AM
Good read. Congrats on your premium membership!
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Date: 5/11/2013 5:02:00 PM
Michael, :-) Have yourself a wonderful and lovely Mother's Day. Lots of Luv & Hugs *Linda
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