Dr. Upma A. Sharma Poet Free verse

Even the Angels Wept

Even the Angels wept




As I walked amidst stars 
to find my glitter fade into their twinkle,
With my dears I was at war
loneliness reflected in my wrinkles,
Few smiles in darkness if life could sprinkle ..

Heyday of life and many promises unkept,
To knocks of heaven, even the Angels wept.




Written May 5th, 2016
For contest by John lawless

Awarded N/A

Now entered for "Second chance may 16" poetry contest by Eve

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September 13, 2016 at 11:00 PM Great poem.

Skat A July 24, 2016 at 1:31 AM Dr Upma.. Lovely win. Skat

Teddy Kimathi June 8, 2016 at 5:43 PM Congrats Dr. Upma, on your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Pandita Sietesantos June 6, 2016 at 8:53 AM Congratulations on a wonderful, well-deserved win, Dr. Sharma! Such a beautiful but sad, touching piece that I enjoyed reading. Pandita

Seosamh De Burca June 5, 2016 at 9:02 PM Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper June 5, 2016 at 8:50 PM Dr. Upma A. Sharma, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sandra Haight June 5, 2016 at 8:14 PM Dr. Upma, congratulations on your well-deserved win for this sad but beautiful poem in the 'second chance' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Beautiful Scars June 5, 2016 at 7:16 PM Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-Luloo

Harry Horsman May 10, 2016 at 4:15 PM wonderful poetry Upma, just love the sentiment.

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2016 at 7:47 PM this is really lovely, Upma. One of your best for imagery.

Janice Canerdy May 6, 2016 at 8:51 AM Very expressive, Upma. Janice