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Even If There's No More To Give

Even if I feel there's nothing more to give, death may come but I choose to live. I'll read her goodbye letter to open my eyes, and keep my nightmares of when she cries. I'll keep climbing up and away from the cliff, even if I feel there's nothing more to give. I kept a small promise from her cowardly lies, my life is contingent on her disturbing goodbyes. When she slowly killed her counterfeit disguise, I deliberated all her premeditated whats and whys. Even if I feel there's nothing more to give, it's not fair her final weeks I must relive. For so long I blamed myself for her demise, I'm disgruntled and lived with constant scrutinize. I must live to be free from being so vindictive, even if I feel there's nothing more to give. Rhyme Scheme: AABB-AABB-BBAA-BBAA ~Written By: Laura Loo~ ~Date Written: March 28, 2016~

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Date: 3/28/2016 1:07:00 PM
Very well done, Laura Loo, even with such a disturbing subject matter...
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Date: 3/28/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thank you Charlie :)-luloo

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