Even Here

Hands interlocking A smile that holds no hidden shame A lake in a world on fire Waves whispering promises of a future Where even here I am found

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/23/2025 10:58:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/19/2025 11:33:00 PM

Lovely poem

Maddy Miller
Date: 4/19/2025 11:35:00 PM

Thank you so much!! It had been swirling in my brain for a while

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/19/2025 7:37:00 PM

Hope amidst chaos and turmoil.Very nice.

Maddy Miller
Date: 4/19/2025 11:35:00 PM

Thank you!!