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Even As A Lonely Cloud

If my body can't be healed to hike on towering mountains, Then just make my soul wander across the heavens, even as a lonely cloud.

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Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2023 3:31:00 AM

Ah this feels like a very sincere soulful write and shows how much you yearn to hike on towering mountains. Absolutely loved reading this. Sending you light always

R. B. Cawis
Date: 12/11/2023 10:30:00 AM

Thank you very much... It feels bad to think that I'm counting my days while my dreams are left hanging in the middle of my road... But my body aches so much that I could hardly make even a single step and the only thing I could wish for is just an end to my ordeal...