Eve Unearths Eden

Beyond is Jordan, past the great Red Sea,
a distance cov’ring awesome, frightful years.
Invisible her pathway heading home
while Eve awaits the target of her soul.
Through darksome deserts, wand'ring back again
she learns the whereabouts concerning God.

The Holy Spirit is her breath from God;
she praises Him for opening her sea,
for granting ears to hear Him once again.
He’s been her Shield throughout these many years
since Satan hurled his darts upon her soul.
With thanks to God, she’s on the road called home.

She’s found wherever God is, that is home
and stakes her trust in One eternal God.
Like Josh and Caleb, she’s a faithful soul
to celebrate as she outruns her sea.
Her kith and kin show doubt for countless years -
complaining, fearful, time and time again.

When greed and jealous spirits plague again,
she starts to question what she called her home.
Her feet have tread on alleyways for years.
The place prepared by her omniscient God
has boulevards of gold just past the sea
no sun is needed, Christ will light her soul.

No cause for censure, heaven fills her soul
down here on earth. She ponders once again
by trusting God to clear her way of sea
eternal life begins on her way home.
The Holy Spirit lives within as God
and fills her as His temple all her years.

She trusts Him for the distance and for years
and lives with hope down deep within her soul.
Christ is the link that joins her life to God,
creating in her heart the will to gain
sweet fellowship with Him who wants our home
to be with Him well past this earthly sea.

Through endless years here crossing o’er the sea
Eve bares her soul and finds the perfect home
Almighty God spread Eden's gates again.

November 18, 2014

Sponsor:  Unseeking Seeker
Contest:   Show Me God

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/26/2014 9:22:00 PM
REASON, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
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Date: 12/18/2014 10:17:00 AM
You have penned a wonderful poem, in this difficult form......bravo to you... I still struggle with meter, but it seems something that you have mastered beautifully !! Congratulations !
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Date: 12/17/2014 5:31:00 PM
beautifully penned many congrats reason:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:50:00 AM
Enjoyable tale nicely narrated, congratulations on the win
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Date: 12/16/2014 1:32:00 PM
Congrats on the win Reason...huggs
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