Eve of Christmas Eve

third time rolling through the fog, lights burst asunder returning, picking up ingredients for spouse mustard and pickles wave, sigh 12/24/2019
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Krutsinger Avatar
December 25, 2019 at 3:18 AM
Gorgeous explanation.
One Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 12:22 PM
a festive tanka.. very well constructed..
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:17 AM
Hello Kim, you would not want to be in the shopping mall now. At least it is food just to get. Hugs Darlene Merry Christmas.
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 26, 2019 at 11:42 AM
Kim, What is rouladin? Is it some sort of a meat meal? Have a nice day my friend.
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December 24, 2019 at 11:56 AM
Hello Kim, enjoy your your meal of rouladin. What is this type of meal? I never heard of it.Merry Christmas. hugs Darlene.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 24, 2019 at 8:37 AM
Totally agree! I was glad to do it. My husband was working so hard on a delicious rouladin for today’s dinner. We were so tired.
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