Eve

and the snake said to eve
you **** now eat this apple
and eve found the snakes eyes enchanting
and his apples where big
and juicy sweet
she bit in she bit in hard
and the snake smiled
the story goes on
for many books
and god damns many souls
i am questioning my faith
right now
as is many
i am questioning my life
my death my birth
my dog my family my friends
my job my time my patience
my girl my truck my writing
my existance
i am questioning eve
the snake
and those g.d lust-filled apples
as is many
but it is futile
for everything will continue
as it always has
with no rest in sight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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July 21, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Patrick, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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