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Eve

I can
be your sparrow
if you 
promise not to 
be my cage

Copyright © Rita Odeh | Year Posted 2014

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January 6, 2022 at 12:57 AM

Thanks for sharing this. May I share with you God's love, expressed in John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you.

Ibohal Kshetrimayum

November 21, 2018 at 12:34 AM

Sparrows are always free. Love the poem.

December 5, 2015 at 6:18 PM

Rita, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**

April 21, 2014 at 12:15 AM

Like this short work a lot. B'Shalpm Matthew Anish

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April 1, 2014 at 11:17 AM

I love, the thirst of flying free with love... Nice tanka, Rita... Hope to see more from you... Linda

April 2, 2014 at 3:47 AM

Thanks, Linda for your kind feedback. Does your daily contest have to be inspired by the given photo? http://rita-odeh.blogspot.com @ritaodehnazareth

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