David William Breidenthal Poet Rhyme

eve

leave
Steve
leave

Scary
Gary
So wary

Story
Glee?
My plea...

Come home, relief...
Before or after eve
My house is in grief 
Leave them - I believe

Make it 2012 heaven
Not 2011...in haven...
Please, please, please
Set her mind at ease...

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Ink Empress November 5, 2024 at 11:09 PM Thats so nice of you to dedicate this to your mom, i love the rhymes at the beginning, and how it flows in a catchy rhythm: pleasure reading you. Sending you light always~ David William Breidenthal November 6, 2024 at 2:16 PM Thank you :) I'm sending you delight and happiness your way

Andrea Dietrich November 4, 2024 at 4:23 PM Hmmm so intriguing! David William Breidenthal November 5, 2024 at 2:13 PM Thank you! :) It's dedicated to my mom ....