Barbara Barry-Nishanian Poet Rhyme

Eve

EVE

Eve is a warning example 
for women of today.?To never disobey God,
to do things … our own way.

Over whelming desire to take
what belonged not to her
Danger dwell on wrong desires,
got her well … you know where.

Like Eve we all have our free will,
our choice ours to make.
Pray we women today smarter,
never make … Eve’s mistake.

Contest: Twelve Lines
Sponsor: Joanna Daniel

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Christopher Grieves September 3, 2023 at 2:51 PM I think Eve gets a hard press at times. No-one gives her credit for sharing and women in my life have always been selfless sharers.. but your point is well made Barbara :) Barbara Barry-Nishanian September 5, 2023 at 11:45 AM Now Christopher, come on ... inviting to share disobedience, turned out bad for human race. Rom. 5:10 does not blame Eve, say... Through one MAN .... Blame correctly placed. Agree?

Eve Roper July 21, 2023 at 9:13 AM Be nice if man followed the same warning. Enjoyed the verse, good luck in the contest.

Kim Merryman July 4, 2023 at 9:43 PM Barbara, congrats on your win with Eve's story! Blessings, Kim M Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 19, 2023 at 10:46 PM Kim. thank you for letting me know I placed, and so much for visiting. Sorry not been around lately. thanks again.

Paula Goldsmith July 4, 2023 at 9:55 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Eve" is a lovely write/story. Love your line, "To never disobey God,." So very true. Have a blessed day................. Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 19, 2023 at 10:49 PM Paula. sorry getting back to PS. so late. I believe we learn valuable lessons for others mistakes, so we don't have to make them. Gonna visit you now, Thanks and visit again, friend.

Christuraj Alex July 3, 2023 at 1:26 AM Ended well with a powerful message. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel July 3, 2023 at 12:39 AM Great lessons learned from Eve, Barbara, thank you for participating:) Barbara Barry-Nishanian July 19, 2023 at 10:56 PM Joanna, thank you so much for giving me a placement in your contest. I appreciate your spiritual contest. I feel we all need reminders of the more important lessons in life You were wonderful to offer this opportunity. Thanks so much, my friend.