Eve

EVE Eve is a warning example for women of today.?To never disobey God, to do things … our own way. Over whelming desire to take what belonged not to her Danger dwell on wrong desires, got her well … you know where. Like Eve we all have our free will, our choice ours to make. Pray we women today smarter, never make … Eve’s mistake. Contest: Twelve Lines Sponsor: Joanna Daniel

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Christopher Grieves

Date: 9/3/2023 2:51:00 PM

I think Eve gets a hard press at times. No-one gives her credit for sharing and women in my life have always been selfless sharers.. but your point is well made Barbara :)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 9/5/2023 11:45:00 AM

Now Christopher, come on ... inviting to share disobedience, turned out bad for human race. Rom. 5:10 does not blame Eve, say... Through one MAN .... Blame correctly placed. Agree?

Eve Roper

Date: 7/21/2023 9:13:00 AM

Be nice if man followed the same warning. Enjoyed the verse, good luck in the contest.

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/4/2023 9:43:00 PM

Barbara, congrats on your win with Eve's story! Blessings, Kim M

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/19/2023 10:46:00 PM

Kim. thank you for letting me know I placed, and so much for visiting. Sorry not been around lately. thanks again.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/4/2023 9:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Eve" is a lovely write/story. Love your line, "To never disobey God,." So very true. Have a blessed day.................

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/19/2023 10:49:00 PM

Paula. sorry getting back to PS. so late. I believe we learn valuable lessons for others mistakes, so we don't have to make them. Gonna visit you now, Thanks and visit again, friend.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/3/2023 1:26:00 AM

Ended well with a powerful message. Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/3/2023 12:39:00 AM

Great lessons learned from Eve, Barbara, thank you for participating:)

Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 7/19/2023 10:56:00 PM

Joanna, thank you so much for giving me a placement in your contest. I appreciate your spiritual contest. I feel we all need reminders of the more important lessons in life You were wonderful to offer this opportunity. Thanks so much, my friend.