Eve

Lonely Adam became happy, loving God wanted to see,
so, from his rib He fashioned the first woman, me.
The beguiler of men, I became his brave wife,
nurturing the Garden of Eden we had wonderful life.

Deceived by a snake that was Satan in vile disguise,
we ate the forbidden fruit to become Godlike and wise.
I knew we had sinned, and were in disgraceful shame,
expelled from Eden by God, a cursed couple we became.

For my fault I got a life of sorrow and childbirth travail,
and God made the power of Adam on me to prevail.
The mother of all living, I was happy on the contrary,
being the prefigurement of the mother of Jesus, Mary.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Congrats on your win, lovely first person perspective and very accurate. Enjoyed.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:10 PM
Thank you, Barbara for your encouraging comment and for enjoying the poem.
Merryman Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 8:47 PM
I like how you wrote in first person as Eve. Well done! Congrats on your 1st place win, Subimal! Blessings, Kim M
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Kim for your visit and for your comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed reading it again. Have a blessed day.................
Daniel Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 11:46 PM
Many wrote on Eve, but yours was the best, Subimal, congratulations on top win:)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 12:12 AM
Thank you, Joanna for the placement and for the encouraing comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 11:32 AM
I enjoyed your write/story about "Eve." Have a fun/blessed ~~ day/weekend.......
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:04 PM
Thank you, Paula.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Excellent! Enjoyed very much, Subimal!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
June 25, 2023 at 11:02 PM
Thank you, Kim for your encouraging comment that I value very much.
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