Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

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Evanescing Echoes

I am an echo of time

A fleeting moment about to end

Where lost horizons mime

And fading dreams defend

Like a decaying dust

A massless mold with endeavor

Like a restless rust

A nuance within the never

I fall into existence

Behold my name

I am the path of least resistance

Searching for where I came

Let me jump into the abyss

Soon you will forget who I am

Will you truly miss?

That I was a hologram!

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July.15.2020
Last poetry contest...
Sponsored by~ Silent One

Placed 2'nd...Thank You

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Paul Marc June 2, 2023 at 12:38 PM A beautiful poet.

Constance La France May 30, 2023 at 1:58 PM Winged Warrior, oh how you are missed, I miss you every day, rest in peace dear poetic friend, gone but not forgotten !

Lady Labyrinth April 9, 2021 at 11:36 AM never forgotten, always near

Connie Marcum Wong November 11, 2020 at 3:23 PM This poem is one of your best and it will keep the essence of you forever alive in my memories of what a loving soul you were. I just found out about your transition into the heavenly realm today and you will be sorely missed by so many here at the Soup including me. Prayers and blessings to your family and friends. Aloha ‘Oe my dear poet. xxoo Connie

Jennifer Proxenos August 20, 2020 at 8:51 AM BUT YOU ARE NOT A HOLOGRAM, EVEN THOUGH THIS IS A BRILLIANT POEM. HOWEVER EVEN IF YOU WERE A HOLOGRAM, YES i WOULD REMEMBER YOU FOR YOU WILL ALWAYS BE A POET WHO STANDS OUT ON SOUP - CONGRATULATIONS WINGED WARRIOR I APPLAUD YOU. BLESSINGS AND HUGS, JENNIFER.

Aditi Mishra July 28, 2020 at 11:23 AM As I read this muse I wanted to say 'Here comes the brilliance of an outstanding poet with the mastery of enchanting emotions' and that describes your words WW. Congratulations on your win! :)

Eve Roper July 26, 2020 at 4:32 PM ^WW^, congratulations on your win with these beautiful poem. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2020 at 5:34 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One July 26, 2020 at 2:36 AM We are all echoes of time my friend... profound poetry... Hope you are well and behaving.. How ironic, PS was down and this could have been the last contest for me! Congratulations on your placement in the contest

Caren Krutsinger July 17, 2020 at 3:35 AM "I am the path of least resistance Searching for where I came" - this captured me and the last line captivated me. This poem I will remember maybe always Winged Warrior.

Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2020 at 12:55 PM Really fun! Love it, my friend! I went to a hologram museum when I was in high school.

Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2020 at 4:56 PM wow, I LOVE where you took that theme. I have no clue how to do such a poem as he asked for. Love this.

Sand Blown July 15, 2020 at 1:59 PM ...'an echo...a fleeting moment...massless ...a nuance...hologram...of least resistance'....wowza....thought forms all... ....stan sand

John Watt July 15, 2020 at 1:05 PM Wingman, always a pleasure to see your deep thoughts, alliterative word pairings, and evocative images. Well done sir Wingster, and GL in the contest ~ JW

Heidi Sands July 15, 2020 at 12:57 PM Wow, so cool WW. Well done :)

Arturo Michael July 15, 2020 at 8:43 AM And a really good hologram...it can be very painful while alive...I enjoyed it...All the best

James Long July 15, 2020 at 8:18 AM What could be more decadent, than to give fragrant homage to a hologram, lol? very clever, lol. love this!