Evanescent

Gray leaden murkiness rests in the light hours
For which there was no light
Their barren lifelessness was visible, as their arms wobbled
Cracked and scorn beaten down
Dry as the desert, the tears have bleed away
Sucked out and left to wander 
And so they have lost against the truculent world 
 Numb, inept and ossified spirits  
Crushed like pellets of a beautiful rose 
Torn from their stem of the pulse 
Slowly evaporating into a dull colorless dust 
No longer of value for they have shed there hold to dwell
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 8:14 AM
Such a sad reflection, Laura. You have an amazing vocabulary and employ it so well! Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
March 4, 2010 at 5:13 AM
I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Laura. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration. Love,Carol
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March 4, 2010 at 12:17 AM
A beauty. You use such powerful images...Love it... Always, Farah chamma
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