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Eurydice and Her Moonbeamed Tresses

Why in his presence, did her soft heart, always like  sweet 
cotton candy melt?
Orchestral songs engendered the tenderest feelings, to her 
heart, so aquamarine velvet.

Such starlit, subtle, shameless, suggestive glances!
An antennae in every way was she, inviting kaleidoscopic, 
tsunamic romances.

On the fog cradled ship, with a cape of fog, blessing her 
chiseled,moonbeam face, 
His arms enclosed her in a velveteen gold, cuddled in his
silent, starshine embrace.

Oh, poetess, penning of feelings of deep intimacy.
Your poem, will be stamped “romantic “?
A term, you loathe and find so very meaningless and worse, 
utterly curt and disgustingly pedantic!

But only a poet who knows your heart to its scarlet
inner flaming core,
Has the outstanding bravissimo to knock on your truly 
insatiable, heart’s-door! 

Dare he try his wings and wish for such magically,
exotic, sensual satisfaction?
Wrapped in those twilight, wild, moonbeamed curls 
of Eurydice’s Olympian extraction!

                              6/4/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Eagle Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 12:19 PM
Your natural skills for writing poetry is wonderful. This piece is so creative.
Romios Avatar
June 9, 2024 at 4:37 PM
Elena, I am nota “fathead” when it comes to poetry skills. And I see nothing natyral about it. You know how hard I an on myself, when it comes to poetry. I wish what you said was true)). But I’d rather write with honesty than using A1, it is obvious when a poet does it, I feel sorry for them. Pangie
Greenhough Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 6:54 PM
I love this poem. It shows your talent for writing.
Romios Avatar
June 6, 2024 at 9:54 AM
What a lovely thing to say, Hilda! I still have a long way to go.)) Pangie Romios
Elliott Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Beauteous artwork, Pangie! xoxx
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:28 PM
Indeed it is, )) Check out his arms! Wonder if they had gyms in ancient Greece! Like,,, “Aristostle’s Aerobics Arena” ! Joking, I am sure they were not home online. P,us they danced a lot and ate great foods. Pangie
Goldsmith Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 1:02 PM
What a lovely/wonderful write with a great picture. Will there be a part 2??? Have A Wonderful Day...............
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:03 PM
Paula..image added, hope you like. Pangie.
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 2:21 PM
Its a sad,sad story,..she dued young..he got to the ling of the dead and begged her releaese. It was granted, but he did not follow instructions! He lost her forever. Image was removed! New one could not be added, sorry, and thank you. Pangie
Elliott Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:20 AM
......and a FAV!
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Changed the image, the other one looked squashed. Yuk This also is more Greek looking, Opa! Pangie and her romantic, romantic soul.
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:51 AM
Many thanks, i do not take such an honor lightly. Blessings, Pangir
Elliott Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Absolutely stunning, good friend. A poem of beauty to behold. So well done. Bravo! xoxx
Romios Avatar
June 5, 2024 at 11:46 AM
Thank you.I love the story of these two!. It has fascinated me for years. I sometimes shock myself. This poem is, in IMHO, a work of beauty. I mean that with all my heart. Your inpot and support appreciated ! Pangie
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