Premiere Contest WinnerEUROVISIONs GOLD-Sleep My Love 1958

Enchants, “Dors, mon amour,” night of romance.
Long ago, he crooned, put hearts in a trance.

André Claveau, nearing fifty years old,
effulgence of French lips, Eurovision’s gold.

Some audience, annoyed, at love’s deep sleep -
need be left alone, or for love to leap…

The words, that poetically churn, nonsense
to the incensed, these verses of suspense.

Sleep, my love - will she awake or’s love passed?
He’s locked his princess in tower of past.

The contentment, of love, some find boring -
nuances “ever-after” adoring.

1958, Giraud and Delanoë,
do stare into the lover’s peace and joy.

Sleep is in the hollow of his heart. She
is together with him all night, in lee.

It is not just in movement, we give praise,
for the hope of birdsong clings to dusk’s blaze.

“With all the refrains of the night,” heart beats.
“The sun is still far from daylight,” its sweets.

Poet might interpret eternal love
as in moment or forever “above.”

Such love is felt so deep and stirred in sleep.
It’s present in a Frenchman’s tongue. I weep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Radhakrishna Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 4:16 AM
congrats on your top win!! great lines like It is not just in movement, we give praise, for the hope of birdsong clings to dusk’s blaze. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you so much! Smiling ear to ear! I was happy to find out about Eurovision and this lovely song caught my attention! :)
Liguori Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 11:28 PM
Nice poem. Congratulations.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 5:48 AM
Thank you, Robert!
Christian Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 12:07 PM
Wonderful Congratulations on your win
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thank you, Diane!
Toney Avatar
June 15, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Kim, I love your amorous tribute to André Claveau, the 1958 Eurovision winner. I watched his outstanding performance on YouTube. Smooth. Your last couplet says it all. Congratulations on your First-place win!
Toney Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 6:10 AM
I’m glad I did too. I waited until after finalizing the contest to view the winning songs that were mentioned. This was my first year of viewing the Eurovision finals live. Quite an outstanding production!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 5:49 AM
Thank you, Mark! So glad you checked it out on YouTube to have the experience!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 1:18 AM
Once upon a time, we had a Song Eurovision. Now we have pure lust and trash. I have long stopped watching the program. I still recall Non Ho L'Eta by Giliola Cinquetti and Waterloo by Abba and many more.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 15, 2024 at 5:29 AM
I had my eye on a sweet one! A long lasting marriage is to be treasured. How we love to know our loved one is right beside us and well you know, as does my Dad, the grief, and yet the breath of the memories wait for new ones in heaven. God bless.
Romios Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 1:36 PM
Glad I came back as my comment is missing. I made this a Fav as it is so musically creative, I even recall what I said in the commoent…I felt that it made me feel like getting up and dancing and I can no longer dance. Congratulations on a fantastic, poem.And may be mistaken, but I think there was also a common from Jan in Australia. She was one of the first commentors I even remember what she said, and that’s not here either. Pretty spooky. PangieRomios Pangie
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 2:47 PM
I appreciate you letting me know that comments could be disappearing. We really take our time to say the right thing. Glad you liked this and faved it too! Thanks so much, Pangie!
Hind Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 1:02 PM
What a voice! How beautiful a poem about it- and him; <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 2:50 PM
Thank you, Paige! Glad I looked up Eurovision. I had never heard about it before.
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 10:56 AM
Bonjour! Aha, mon ami. I found the beautiful song. I could never be bored of The contentment of love. Translations welcome, thank you for sharing your precious ode to a winning French song! My grandmother was known to say we have French in us! ;)
Anaya Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Very interesting, Iroquois Nation wow! My daughter did the DNA test, on my side it's 58.7% European 4.9% is unknown, she says bruja, I say sasquatch! haha, c'est la vie.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2024 at 11:15 AM
Merci Beaucoup, mon ami! My great great great grandfather, an Iroquois Indian, took a French wife. So I have a little French. Oui! Mais Oui!
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