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Written for the contest  " i can move mountains" sponsored by anoucheka I wrote about my twin sister, that i can never imagine life without. 

Eucalyptus Elixir

If sky is a sea of 
fallen flowers
and dusty diamonds 
glazed in red,
I’ll unfurl the 
saffron sun within,
stretching sandalwood 
arms of serenity,
upon gardens of 
glistening grief,
with healing herbs 
and soothing spices,
from greener grass 
of life amidst sorrow.

For I can 
move mountains 
and secure trees, 
to a therapeutic realm 
where perfumed 
petals never wilt. 
While kindness I sow 
shall sprout in hues 
of warm honey and 
raspberry dreams.

I am an 
unshakable rose,
blooming from 
roots of ruins,
facing fiery fangs of 
the phasing tulip moon
above wildfires 
of whirling woes. 
This musky
spirit is timeless,
resembling the 
flaming heart of 
an untamable phoenix. 
My silence soars
beyond mourning wolves;
ice blue eyes 
of fleeting seasons.

And you, twin-star~
my sister I cannot 
breathe without,
will forever be the reason,
I’ll wear this amethyst 
sequined armor,
to sail through
   ripples of rage, 
like a floating candle
amidst eclipsed tides,
that shifts and sparkles,
while flickering eucalyptus elixir~
upon scentless tea lights.

So if tomorrow, clouds 
above your 
sleepless sanctuary 
swing with poisoned rain,
to drizzle splinters upon
your bed of melancholy,
remember, I’ll find my way
to your unrhymed spheres,
steal perfectly metered 
syllables of hope, 
from the elysian above,
that sprinkles
champagne lunar-beams,
and I’ll weave 
a curative poem
beneath the ink-less
canvas of acrylic dirt, 
to calm your 
midnight musings with
mellifluous metaphors.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Rodgers Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 7:00 PM
Dearest Ink Empress, Just wanted to drop a line to say your poem is out of this world! The imagery you created feels like diving into a surreal dreamscape. Seriously, "saffron sun" and "raspberry dreams" — pure magic! Your words are like a soothing balm on a rough day, pointing to hope into every verse. You've got a talent for crafting beauty out of melancholy. Keep shining bright like the twin-star you are! Good Luck! - Blessings, Daniel
Beaufort Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 10:11 AM
It speaks volumes of your love. Did you grow up in a loving household or take care of each other often? I think about my own sisters and our relationship. There was no love available when we were growing up together. I love my sisters now, but not with the fervor and intensity you describe, which is remarkably strong and beautiful. It is a wonderful thing that I strive to recreate later in life, which is not an easy thing considering our childhood.
Hind Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 1:41 PM
So loving, your words are beautiful. God bless the bond that you share. :) <3
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:56 AM
Awwn bless you
Greenhough Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 11:53 AM
I felt the love in your poem. You are two lucky people. 'Warm honey and raspberry dreams' is a generous gift of comfort to your sister. I'm sure she will appreciate her poem.
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Awwn thank you dear hilda always truly for your sweetness
Poet Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 10:43 AM
This poem is a truly remarkable testament to your commitment, my dear friend Ink. I am confident that your sister will find immense joy in reading this, and she will undoubtedly appreciate having a sister and twin as exceptional as you. It serves as a radiant homage to our capacity for enduring strength, empathy, and the indomitable links that bolster us in life's challenges. It serves as a poignant reminder of the profound influence that love possesses and the therapeutic potency of poetry.
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:44 AM
Ah thank you dr sotto for your kindness and support i am always grateful for your generous and uplifting presence.
Rose  Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 9:34 AM
I am an unshakable rose, rooted in twin love, our are grounded through each other's connection, I understand that, I am reading a book right now that is about craniopagos twins, born at birth sewed to the head but separate bodies, very good read, :)
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Awwn thank you sweet rose , me and my twin we often read about such twins born that way and talk about how strange it would have been to be born attached. Grateful always for your poetic presence
One Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Its a luminous ode to resilience, compassion, and the unbreakable bonds that sustain us through life's trials and tribulations. It reminds us of the transformative power of love and the healing potential of poetry in times of darkness and despair.
One Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 9:02 AM
Awww what a lovely dedication to your twin sister, I bet she loved this one... this poem is breathtaking, painting a portrait of the speaker's steadfast strength and unwavering support amidst the tumultuous seas of life. From the opening lines, the comparison of the sky to a sea of fallen flowers and dusty diamonds imbues the scene with a sense of ethereal beauty and melancholic grace. great metaphors and adjectives!
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:33 AM
She did definitely love the gesture hah thank u so much for reading n leaving such thoughtful feedback as always i am grateful for your poetic presence truly
Kendrick Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 7:46 AM
Ahh!! So you really care for your twin. How much alike are you? Thanks for sharing this one with us. My son-in-law is one of triplets. One of the brothers got killed in a tornado a few years back. One of his brothers (my son-in-law) had to go in and identify his brother so his parents would not have to do that, and it was like seeing himself lying there. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara K
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 7:49 AM
Ah dear sara we are five mins apart and we used to switch classes in primary school too, and fool teachers, so we were and are identical twins. I cant even imagine the pain your son in law must have felt, sigh. Thank you for sharing and for your comment
Gasun Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Wow! This is absolutely breathtaking dedication poem to your twin sister my dearest poet friend Ink. I'm sure your sister is so happy to read this, and very grateful to have a sister and twin like you. I wasn't lucky to have a sister but may I borrow some of my friends here now? May I borrow sisters who're excellent poets, you and your twin? (smile). Thank you so much for sharing. Loving this masterpiece a lot. God bless you both and your writings always. Hugs
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Awn ofcourse thank you so much for such a sincere and heartfelt comment truly i am grateful for your support
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:48 AM
You certainly move mountains with a kindred heart--love for your sister resonates throughout, my friend--in superb diction and metaphors.--While kindness I sow shall sprout in hues of warm honey and raspberry dreams--and I’ll weave a curative poem beneath the ink-less canvas of acrylic dirt, to calm your midnight musings with mellifluous metaphors. Fabulous! A FAVE!
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:53 AM
I am truly grateful for your support fave and sincere feedback always dear vijay! Really . Thank you so much
Sharma  Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Gosh, this is such a sweet and resplendent tribute for your twin sister, my dear Ink! You're a true angel who scribbles such unique kindness for her loved ones.. You both are twin stars and will forever remain comically connected, beyond time. Your wordsmithery here is so enchanting and profound, especially "If sky is a sea of fallen flowers and dusty diamonds glazed in red" That opening line is absolutely stunning! "I am an unshakable rose..facing fiery fangs of the phasing tulip moon" Wow!!
Sharma  Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:57 AM
"from the elysian above,that sprinkles champagne lunar-beams" That's immensely gorgeous.. "while flickering eucalyptus elixir~upon scentless tea lights" Ahh, only you can weave such ethereal phrases with otherworldly elegance.. You and your twin sister, both are beautiful queens, radiating kindness.. May you both keep shining and writing always! Sending love, best wishes and light :)
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Awwn im truly grateful for your generous and kind support always dear sweet hiya. Appreciate your poetic presence everywhere, and for understanding and feeling depth of the metaphors i weave. Sending you light always
Onpaper Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:21 AM
stretching sandalwood arms of serenity,upon gardens of glistening grief, kindness I sow shall sprout in hues of warm honey and raspberry dreams… mmmm the way u can make elements move n create such magnificence!! be the reason,I’ll wear this amethyst sequined armor, to sail through ripples of rage… mmmm u know how to make my heart melt aee papi!!that ending is EVERYTHING!!!weave a curative poem beneath the ink-less canvas of acrylic dirt, to calm your midnight musings with mellifluous metaphors.
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Awwn papi sorry i made u read lolol appreciate ur support always
Marine Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 4:08 AM
A very touching poem for your twin sister-I felt such deep love here, it made me heartsore. Only because I love my little sister too, 3 years younger than me, and while mentally tough, she seems so physically frail... I'm honestly afraid of losing her... You are "an unshakeable rose, blooming from roots of ruins- there is so much steadfast loyalty, protectiveness, nurturing thoughts of comfort and closeness.You spoke volumes to my heart and to many here who also feel strong bonds to each other
Empress Avatar
February 11, 2024 at 6:06 AM
Awn thank you so very much im grateful for your detailed and kind feedback truly, sending you light always
Rhymes Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 3:51 AM
Awwww I’m sure your twin can’t imagine life without you too …. Such a sweet tribute .
Empress Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 8:42 AM
Love you always
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