Joanna Daniel Poet Etheree

Ethereal Wings

Tears 

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from my heart 
echo the ache
you see in my eyes,
The indelible ink 
of my invisible pen
are the stains of harrowing loss,
Yet, as they  s  p  i  l  l  from my steely quill,
they trace my e~t~h~e~r~e~a~l wings - I fly.


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Connie Marcum Wong January 25, 2017 at 5:00 AM Applause, applause! I knew this would impress Jo! So happy to see this in a number one spot! Congratulations my friend! It truly is a fave. : )

Afzal Nusker January 24, 2017 at 9:28 PM Fabulously done! Congrats! A 7

Kim Rodrigues January 24, 2017 at 7:18 PM Lovely, Jo! Congrats!

Alexis Y. January 24, 2017 at 5:24 PM Hi Jo, This is such a heartfelt piece dedicated to broken wings. Congratulations on your. 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Heidi Sands January 23, 2017 at 2:45 PM This is so nice Jo Daniel. I really like this one :)

Connie Marcum Wong January 23, 2017 at 2:24 PM Wow! One of the most creative Etheree I have ever seen No, and I am a lover of this form. Superb content as well. I really hope to see this take the number one spot! I am faving this beauty! 7 ; )

Robert Lindley January 23, 2017 at 8:29 AM Superbly and Beautifully written. I've never written in that poetry form but your great poem illustrates tremendous creativity and flair. A7 Bravo!!

Len Gasun January 22, 2017 at 1:03 AM I'm also certain that our dear friend, WB will love this superb etheree, my dear friend, Jo. I love it too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes always! Hugs!

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2017 at 9:26 PM Jo, this is EXCELLENT etheree, and how you did your line two was great thinking. Never saw that done in an etheree before. Also I like how your title goes so well with the name of the form itself! I think Constance is gonna score this one really high.

Elizabeth Kinch January 21, 2017 at 2:00 PM Beautiful written.

Charlie Smith January 21, 2017 at 11:44 AM Strength and hope is what I read, well done Jo...

Vincent Flannery January 21, 2017 at 10:34 AM Very powerful power Jo Daniel. The form conveys such feeling. God bless.