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Ethereal Wings

Tears d r i p p i n g from my heart echo the ache you see in my eyes, The indelible ink of my invisible pen are the stains of harrowing loss, Yet, as they s p i l l from my steely quill, they trace my e~t~h~e~r~e~a~l wings - I fly. 01:20:17

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/25/2017 5:00:00 AM
Applause, applause! I knew this would impress Jo! So happy to see this in a number one spot! Congratulations my friend! It truly is a fave. : )
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Date: 1/24/2017 9:28:00 PM
Fabulously done! Congrats! A 7
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Date: 1/24/2017 7:18:00 PM
Lovely, Jo! Congrats!
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Date: 1/24/2017 5:24:00 PM
Hi Jo, This is such a heartfelt piece dedicated to broken wings. Congratulations on your. 1st place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:45:00 PM
This is so nice Jo Daniel. I really like this one :)
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:24:00 PM
Wow! One of the most creative Etheree I have ever seen No, and I am a lover of this form. Superb content as well. I really hope to see this take the number one spot! I am faving this beauty! 7 ; )
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Date: 1/23/2017 8:29:00 AM
Superbly and Beautifully written. I've never written in that poetry form but your great poem illustrates tremendous creativity and flair. A7 Bravo!!
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Date: 1/22/2017 1:03:00 AM
I'm also certain that our dear friend, WB will love this superb etheree, my dear friend, Jo. I love it too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes always! Hugs!
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Date: 1/21/2017 9:26:00 PM
Jo, this is EXCELLENT etheree, and how you did your line two was great thinking. Never saw that done in an etheree before. Also I like how your title goes so well with the name of the form itself! I think Constance is gonna score this one really high.
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Date: 1/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
Beautiful written.
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Date: 1/21/2017 11:44:00 AM
Strength and hope is what I read, well done Jo...
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Date: 1/21/2017 10:34:00 AM
Very powerful power Jo Daniel. The form conveys such feeling. God bless.
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