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Ethereal Lanterns

Written: March 30, 2024 For Ink Empress Ethereal Lantern Contest

Quote By Rumi: “The lamps are different, but the Light is the same. One matter, one energy, one Light, one Light-mind, endlessly emanating all things.”
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In every fleeting felicity, twilight dislimns.
Gaunt into gossip, gossamer of gold glove.
Sewn-in vibrant amethyst and topaz,
laden in the ethereal glow of moonlight.

An eerily lit candle glides over the sea,
brittle, bare in a lambent, gossamer veil
soft vibe exudes a nostalgic indigo mood.
A life pearl holds hope and love
exquisite lantern shapes ethos
diaphanous for a soft glow
quiet pull and rhythmic delight.

Dazzle and dance to Daunt Daub
awe-inspiring lanterns, a mesmerizing sight
a gentle glow gracefully grows with breeze,
Elysian elixir sight to elicit one to their knees.

Owls deem Nubian sky depths
a heartfelt jewel from heaven
Humanity is still a model of clay
overlooked amid the artifacts of divine
blithely beshrew beleaguer blunt battle
and how the fluid obscurity undulated
embrace that pure clarity
If gloom dulled spark of empyreal kismet.

Their genesis maunder motley mystery
their nexus is nebulous; ogle as a panacea
and possess a hypnotic, pellucid spell
It casts a glow on all who dwell.

Fetch them felicitously, float flourishing,
and feel your soul overflowing with love
amid auric doxology of celestial lanterns
Infuse your spirit with unadulterated bliss.

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Ink Empress April 8, 2024 at 2:07 AM Dear Sotto, what a glorious take on the prompt! Your use of gems and cosmic touch of words that flow in such a celestial manner truly is impeccable and impressive. Youv used all the elements that i would appreciate and be in awe of, and you did it seamlessly in this write. Flows well and is easy to read, soulfully ethereal! I especially love the opening and ending in this take! As well as your use of poetic techniques such as alliterations really stood out for me! Pleasure reading. Congratulations

Duke Beaufort April 1, 2024 at 6:31 AM SP, I believe you're saying we have the ability to be what we choose (within our human limits) and we can take in the energy of the universe that binds all things as an aid in our quest. Light is truly amazing and you make it so beautiful.

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2024 at 8:01 AM Creative lines penned in this one. Way to go. Thanks for dropping by my page with congratulations on my POTD. I hope this is the best Easter Sunday for you and yours. Sara K

Dr. Padmashree R P March 31, 2024 at 7:24 AM Very beautiful poem with great imagery. Thanks

Silent One March 31, 2024 at 4:51 AM Amidst the enchanting scenes, the poem hints at deeper truths about humanity's relationship with the divine and the eternal quest for clarity and enlightenment. The phrase "Humanity is still a model of clay overlooked amid the artifacts of divine" suggests a humble acknowledgment of our imperfections and our enduring search for meaning and transcendence.

Howard Kerr March 30, 2024 at 7:03 PM Dear Sotto, Your work is a scintillating voyage of imaginative poetic devices, endearing word selections, and ethereal references. The natural world is a silken stream of divine description at the behest of your pen. Genuine thanks for your reflections on Wounded Sigh Howard

Paige Hind March 30, 2024 at 4:28 PM Beautiful work, Sotto- you have an enchanting AND ethereal piece you've written, loved it