Ethereal Lanterns

The sparkling spirit of your love, 
merges with mine, 
dwelling in passages of time, as
my heart sings symphonies of 
ethereal lanterns, 
beaming upon golden poppies,
while drifting across haloes of 
glittering stardust. 

Our divine souls flutter full circle, 
when light meets dark;
a sacred union amidst 
cherry blossom petals, 
swirling in a helix of 
devoted scintillation, 
towards the sanctuary of 
our blooming dedication.

This faith in you 
is my heavenly glow, 
a paradise of hopes and dreams,
swaying to your deific verve—
the gilded moon my spotlight, as 
celestial lullabies serenade 
this blissful twilight, 
sheltered in your cherubic love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 5/1/2024 11:53:00 AM
It feels surreal
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Date: 4/8/2024 2:13:00 AM
Ah my beautiful soul sis! I absolutely love this truly, the way youv expressed and written in such a soulful and sincere voice delivering a very captivating write in the. Most eloquent manner, is impeccable! You always write what would connect to my soul and leave me in awe! And this is no exception! I especially loved the opening lines in this along with “ beaming upon golden poppies, while drifting across haloes of glittering stardust. “ how cosmically magical! Just beautiful! The way you write spiritually too is moving and meaningful while ensuring that you do paint imagery too in the most artistic manner! Pleasure reading this! A fave it is for me and congratulations on your win
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Date: 3/14/2024 2:36:00 PM
Dear FSS, i found this to be a breathtaking ode to love's transcendent beauty and spiritual connection. The imagery you created is ethereal and captivating, a picture of love as a celestial force that illuminates the darkest of nights. I loved the metaphor of ethereal lanterns and celestial lullabies which evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment, while the imagery of cherry blossom petals and golden poppies adds a touch of earthly grace. Truly a wonderful poetic expression.- Blessings Daniel
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Date: 3/14/2024 5:25:00 AM
Awesome love poem with a spiritual bent to it. You merge romanticism with the heavenly and ethereal seamlessly, O Fading One
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Date: 3/14/2024 3:00:00 AM
ti amo infinito per semore amore mio Because you live i live addicted to you to the moon and back and everywhere. I love you deeply micia..mia passione..tuo..il nostro eterno amore
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Date: 3/14/2024 2:57:00 AM
I love this so much amore? your deep soulful words making me feel your profubdity and fsith in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. Your grace and nobility in your divine light and your cherry blossoms heartbeats of faith and hope wrap me in a paradise of bliss,my korean princess. You take my breath away inhaling your divine essence in lavender rose fragrance of your spirituality,my marvelous creature. Your love is my religion, you are my angel Mia bellissima moglie
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