Ethereal Extrapolation

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past retentiveness
absurdity would not last
you or me
      idiosyncratic

riddles held not held
pain lurking
an obdurate innuendo
        bonafide

talks uttered 
not uttered by me
an acquaintance
         whimsical bearing

I can witness
concurrently
a squandering
magnetism balanced 
               voluptuousness

blurred cipher
withstanding at the egress
nevermore ingress
taught apotheosized
              in conundrum


THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived. Poem inspired by Poet Brian Strand.

Written: February 12, 2022

1st place contest winner 

A Strand (1073) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 2/16/2022 3:36:00 AM

Must add my congratulations as well Lasaad, so well done...Delice

Hilo Poet

Date: 2/16/2022 1:07:00 AM

An intriguing form, whereto, in-depth analysis via trial and error awaits me, Lasaad, a hearty thanks and my compliments for your winning entry my friend, Aloha~William, Cheers!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/15/2022 7:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a write/picture. Have a blessed day.................

Valsa George

Date: 2/15/2022 12:37:00 AM

This is a profound write ! It requires more than one reading to extricate it ! Congratulations on your top win Lasaad !

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/12/2022 10:50:00 PM

The poetry is wonderful, the structure superb