Eternos



              If we stand on the edge of time,
                   overlooking God's design. 
                               Of our lives, 
                    what do we make of it?
 Is it even possible that He could ever regret creation?
                        He knows all things.
                           His Son is Man.
                     His Mother is Woman.
   Surely there has been good and noble things.
             There is the miracle of Family.
          Here, there is the Angels in song.
             The more the marrier, right
                               My Trinity, 
    overlooking the edge of time, into Eternity.
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December 12, 2023 at 10:29 AM
This is some deep thinking here Jude... I like the opening lines.. it really leads into the poem... it would be good one for the whatever contest..
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December 12, 2023 at 1:16 PM
Thank you very much for your valuable input, Silent One.
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