Eternity Within Me Touches

I hear sounds of the wind hissing and rustling. I listen on the beach to the waves cascading, Slapping, tossing swashing the sand pebbles, Something close to eternity within me touches. I see some gliding fishing boats over there, The seagulls soaring, gliding in the air here, And Surfers trying to get rides on the waves Something close to eternity within me touches. I watch people running, strolling and sunning, Setting sun promise to rise tomorrow morning Like the human ambitions and unknown desires Something close to eternity within me touches. I notice the crabs scurry, somewhere hiding, Leaving smooth bed of sand, water receding, All sounds now receding to its minimum hiss. Something close to eternity within me touches. This silence rubs, softens me, gives a purpose I find even my pains are held in this silence Surrender my self-importance, my smallness Something close to eternity within me touches.
+++ December 2, 2014 Form: Kyrielle Seventh Place win Contest: One of your best by Gautami Phookan

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Date: 1/23/2015 6:52:00 PM
When we can just relax and become one with nature, it feels like we are a part of something bigger than ourselves... I really enjoyed this beautiful poem and the heavenly imagery within it. Congrats on the win, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations Mehtasaab Regards-rajat
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Date: 1/20/2015 11:04:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta, A Nicely structured kyrielle form and seascape nature observations portrayed here. A well balanced and interesting poem. Congratulations on your great win. Earl
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Date: 1/20/2015 7:28:00 AM
Great write Dr Ram...congrats on the win
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Date: 1/19/2015 11:13:00 PM
Deep and wise Dr. Ram! Wonderful work,, a deserved win,, big congrats !
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Date: 1/19/2015 10:14:00 PM
A lovely, touching poem, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
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Date: 1/19/2015 2:45:00 PM
Nice to read this again Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/11/2014 5:35:00 PM
Very touching work that you have penned in this winner..Way to go ..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 12/2/2014 3:06:00 PM
This truly is a great poem. I will see this on the winners list. Bg
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Date: 12/2/2014 7:30:00 AM
How wonderful when our most precious moments can hug us with a touch of eternity.
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Date: 12/2/2014 5:36:00 AM
Dr Ram, What a Beautiful picture you hold in your heart of eternity. You definitely touched me today with this. Nice write Kevin
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