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Eternity In Sunrise

Spring awakens to remnant snow As winter meets his quietus, he has to go Soon daffodils will lithely sway And spring's rhapsody will rule the day Cherry blossoms put on a show Telling their story in a beautiful way Butterflies will come out to play As spring offers her sweet bouquet Under fathomless blue skies Spring transforms the landscape I see eternity in dawn's sunrise As the season of blooms takes shape - 3-17-18 Contest - Five Words Please Sponsor- Broken Wings

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/15/2018 11:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your high placement Joseph. You already know I faved this one! : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2018 5:28:00 PM

A belated congrats on your win with this gem, Joseph.

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 10:13:00 PM

A lovely poem, Joseph. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2018 3:17:00 PM

Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned spring poem...

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/1/2018 11:31:00 AM

Also, congratulations for being on the best new poem list :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/1/2018 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Maria Williams

Date: 3/23/2018 2:20:00 AM

What a beautiful scenario that you have described Joseph in this great poem. I love Cherry Blossoms too - having experienced the season in Japan a couple of times. You poem is worthy of winning the contest and a FAVE...Maria :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2018 8:04:00 PM

so beautiful. This is a challenge I need to get a move on FAST!!!!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/18/2018 6:21:00 PM

seamless work; i didn't notice the 5 words as they blended so well in your wonderful poem, joseph.. huggs

Eve Roper

Date: 3/18/2018 2:03:00 PM

Joseph, well written using the 5 words and enjoyed reading . Good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2018 8:15:00 AM

- Cherry blossoms .... so beautiful in your poem, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Anne...hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2018 6:37:00 AM

Beautiful, scenic! You seamlessly incorporated the words in your lovely welcome to spring..best for a win, Joseph.

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:50:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Jan Allison

Date: 3/18/2018 5:24:00 AM

wow Joseph i love the way you wove your words into such a glorious spring time rhyme! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thank you Jan..hugs

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/17/2018 9:47:00 PM

This is an fantastic poem, Joseph. A pleasure to read.

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Daniel

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/17/2018 9:30:00 PM

Very nicely written Joseph! Good luck in the contest, :)

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 AM

Thank you Heidi

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2018 8:35:00 PM

This is so beautiful Joseph! You did a brilliant job with your entry and I hope it takes top honors. This poem is going into my Faves! It is just stunning! : )

Joseph May
Date: 3/18/2018 9:48:00 AM

Thank you for making it a fave Connie..Glad you liked it