Joseph May Poet Rhyme

Eternity In Sunrise

Spring awakens to remnant snow
  As winter meets his quietus, he has to go
  Soon daffodils will lithely sway
 And spring's rhapsody will rule the day

 Cherry blossoms put on a show
 Telling their story in a beautiful way
 Butterflies will come out to play
 As spring offers her sweet bouquet

 Under fathomless blue skies
 Spring transforms the landscape
 I see eternity in dawn's sunrise
 As the season of blooms takes shape
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 3-17-18
 Contest - Five Words Please
 Sponsor- Broken Wings

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Connie Marcum Wong April 15, 2018 at 11:57 PM Congratulations on your high placement Joseph. You already know I faved this one! : )

Andrea Dietrich April 13, 2018 at 5:28 PM A belated congrats on your win with this gem, Joseph.

Line Gauthier April 10, 2018 at 10:13 PM A lovely poem, Joseph. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France April 3, 2018 at 3:17 PM Joseph, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned spring poem...

Heidi Sands April 1, 2018 at 11:31 AM Also, congratulations for being on the best new poem list :)

Heidi Sands April 1, 2018 at 9:26 AM Congratulations for your win Joseph :)

Maria Williams March 23, 2018 at 2:20 AM What a beautiful scenario that you have described Joseph in this great poem. I love Cherry Blossoms too - having experienced the season in Japan a couple of times. You poem is worthy of winning the contest and a FAVE...Maria :)

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2018 at 8:04 PM so beautiful. This is a challenge I need to get a move on FAST!!!!

Nette Onclaud March 18, 2018 at 6:21 PM seamless work; i didn't notice the 5 words as they blended so well in your wonderful poem, joseph.. huggs

Eve Roper March 18, 2018 at 2:03 PM Joseph, well written using the 5 words and enjoyed reading . Good luck in the contest.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2018 at 8:15 AM - Cherry blossoms .... so beautiful in your poem, Joseph - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you Anne...hugs

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 6:37 AM Beautiful, scenic! You seamlessly incorporated the words in your lovely welcome to spring..best for a win, Joseph. Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:50 AM Thank you Vijay

Jan Allison March 18, 2018 at 5:24 AM wow Joseph i love the way you wove your words into such a glorious spring time rhyme! good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:49 AM Thank you Jan..hugs

Daniel Turner March 17, 2018 at 9:47 PM This is an fantastic poem, Joseph. A pleasure to read. Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM Thank you Daniel

Heidi Sands March 17, 2018 at 9:30 PM Very nicely written Joseph! Good luck in the contest, :) Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM Thank you Heidi

Connie Marcum Wong March 17, 2018 at 8:35 PM This is so beautiful Joseph! You did a brilliant job with your entry and I hope it takes top honors. This poem is going into my Faves! It is just stunning! : ) Joseph May March 18, 2018 at 9:48 AM Thank you for making it a fave Connie..Glad you liked it