Eternity Defined

" A time grown out of pity like rain on the asphalt. Pain is a pleasure to the unassuming masses. It was not the vow that was broken, but the innocence that stumbled out of reach of lovers torn at the seams "
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Richards Avatar
August 7, 2025 at 1:20 AM
I loved your vignette, Michael. Well done!
Maul Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 6:42 PM
Thank you
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August 17, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Loved reading this poem!
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August 19, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Thank you
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