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Eternity Blooms

Crimson lips touch in the rose bed Sweet scents burst into a whirlwind Wafting winds twirl leaves in a dance Hand in hand, step by step, holding time Sunshine lights the old wooden trellis An arch of memories wait for more vows Another pure, simple, wedding in the garden Never to be forgotten, as eternity blooms Heidi Sands 1/21/24 (C)opyright

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/22/2024 6:43:00 PM

Most profound observations about a garden wedding, Heidi. May Eternity bloom! :) gw

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 1/21/2024 3:55:00 PM

Lovely blooms!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2024 10:19:00 PM

Thank you ! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/21/2024 9:23:00 AM

Your "Eternity Blooms" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it.... Have a wonderful day writing away..............

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2024 10:51:00 AM

Thank you Paula Nice to see your comment today enjoy writing :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/21/2024 6:31:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery, my friend. Much enjoyed!

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2024 9:21:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay :)

Silent One

Date: 1/21/2024 5:57:00 AM

Wonderful imagery here Heidi, this could also be the imagism form..

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2024 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Silent One. And thank you for letting me know, my friend :)

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 5:47:00 AM

As eternity blooms.. Gosh, this is such a magical and ethereal write, depicting love in its most beautiful essence, I love your wordplay that flows ever so gentle in a mellifluous rhythm.. "An arch of memories wait for more vows" Memories weave moments of cherish, knitted with vows.. Ahh, that's really so heartfelt and true.. Those opening lines are so gorgeous too, absolutely beautifully written dear Heidi, loved reading this.. Sending you many best wishes and light ~

Heidi Sands
Date: 1/21/2024 5:56:00 AM

Hi. I appreciate you taking the time to leave such a thorough, positive comment. ! I am very grateful, always. I am happy that you loved reading this. I hope you have a beautiful day :)