Eternity Blooms


Crimson lips touch in the rose bed
Sweet scents burst into a whirlwind
Wafting winds twirl leaves in a dance
Hand in hand, step by step, holding time

Sunshine lights the old wooden trellis
An arch of memories wait for more vows
Another pure, simple, wedding in the garden
Never to be forgotten, as eternity blooms

Heidi Sands

1/21/24

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Wolf Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 6:43 PM
Most profound observations about a garden wedding, Heidi. May Eternity bloom! :) gw
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 3:55 PM
Lovely blooms!
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:19 PM
Thank you ! :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 9:23 AM
Your "Eternity Blooms" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading it.... Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Thank you Paula Nice to see your comment today enjoy writing :)
Pandit Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 6:31 AM
Such beautiful imagery, my friend. Much enjoyed!
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Thank you very much Vijay :)
One Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 5:57 AM
Wonderful imagery here Heidi, this could also be the imagism form..
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Thank you Silent One. And thank you for letting me know, my friend :)
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January 21, 2024 at 5:47 AM
As eternity blooms.. Gosh, this is such a magical and ethereal write, depicting love in its most beautiful essence, I love your wordplay that flows ever so gentle in a mellifluous rhythm.. "An arch of memories wait for more vows" Memories weave moments of cherish, knitted with vows.. Ahh, that's really so heartfelt and true.. Those opening lines are so gorgeous too, absolutely beautifully written dear Heidi, loved reading this.. Sending you many best wishes and light ~
Sands Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 5:56 AM
Hi. I appreciate you taking the time to leave such a thorough, positive comment. ! I am very grateful, always. I am happy that you loved reading this. I hope you have a beautiful day :)
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