Eternity

All these days
stretched out
like
a
c l o t h e s l i n e


The shirt
hanging
waving to the wind

over there


now


gone.



© Gry W. Christensen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Rating this a solid 7 my friend. You go deeper in such few words than others do with long epic writes. Time speeds by so very fast and then it is GONE, GONE , GONE! Great write my friend , pm on the way...
Mcdaid Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 7:21 AM
really like the images drawn in this excellent vision painted
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