Eternity

Close your eyes and imagine this
Eternal bliss
Your every wish
At your finger tips
No weak to heal
The virus is wilt
Death is jilt
ETERNITY
There’s more
Imagine the prophets making up your social sphere
You and your Father with ages the same
Imagine showing off your book with no shame
Imagine nights with the tortoise himself telling his tales
Under moonlights, with no mosquito to bite
And there’s more
Jesus and Muhammad (PBUH) 
Being alive
To slice 
Our lies
And make them right
By being the light 
We’d like 
To shine
Making binds
That tie 
The lineage of man
Being brother to all and all are yours
Cause you are from them and they from you
And there’s more
No night of mares
Of dreams that scare
The young adhere 
To all they care
But all they care
Is the praise of the one who gave them more
And still more
Hosanna Hosanna
At the top of our voice 
No vice
To hinder our price 
Of life
Without lies or lice
What an excellent master 
Of a miserable slave
You forgot
And he forgave
He gave you guidance
And you still strayed?
And more and more and more
‘ETERNITY’
A gift misplaced.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 9/10/2014 7:13:00 PM
Hi Mubarak, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/10/2014 4:24:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mubarak - I choose your first great written poem ! - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Adeola Mubarak
Date: 9/10/2014 4:58:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne, your comment has really made my day, though I'm just getting to know my ability and passion for poem, hoping to do great things with it. Nice meeting you.
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