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Eternity

Feeling of spring, Soul in harmony Cloudiness behind me Blue sky my destiny; Heart of Roses, Grace adding melodies Deep silence leaving me Soft songs my symphony; Whisper of Love, Smiles from Eternity Happiness reaching me Beauty and Serenity.

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Indrani Sarkar

Date: 12/25/2021 7:01:00 AM

Such a sweet and flowing brevity. Beautifully done.

Franci Hoffman

Date: 12/21/2021 2:14:00 PM

I so love this poem! A beautiful and uplifting piece, Zin.

Clive Blake

Date: 12/21/2021 9:08:00 AM

Hi Zin. What a lovely positive poem. I enjoyed reading this. Well done ~ Clive :)

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 12/21/2021 8:32:00 AM

Beautifully crafted... Enjoyed reading... ~ Ani

William Darnell Sr.

Date: 8/25/2021 5:38:00 AM

Hello, Zin! Excellent penning with the quill, my friend. Hopefully, we all will meet you there when it's our time. Everything about your poetry here inspired me today, and I leave you great thanks for the inspirations you left in my heart. God Bless you for sure! Best of Wishes, William

Zin Eddine Dadach
Date: 8/30/2021 2:43:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend William for your kind words. God Bless you and your family Ameen Zin

Jenish Somadas

Date: 12/8/2019 1:43:00 AM

Beautifully penned..

Zin Eddine Dadach
Date: 8/30/2021 4:41:00 AM

Thank you very much Jenish.