Eternal Wish

A FOREVER WISH
Together, with LOVE “ L E N O R E “
ALWAYS  ENTWINING
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Breidenthal Avatar
February 13, 2012 at 8:04 PM
Loved every line! Always, Laura (:
Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 6:21 PM
Always entwining. Great last line, HG.
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2009 at 10:54 AM
Beautiful thought conveyed in few words! Quite an accomplishment. I could not help but think of the poem "Lenore" by Edgar Allen Poe. Thank you for sharing, Carolyn
Lopez Avatar
February 2, 2009 at 4:57 PM
Nice senryu HGarvey and thanks for your comment...............nice
Mckenzie Avatar
January 31, 2009 at 12:57 PM
HGarvey Wonderful love inpowering and free, wonderful you! Laura :)
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January 29, 2009 at 5:01 PM
You have me smiling with this one. Such is the blessing of eternal love. Well said. You are a testamony that love lasts. Have a good day. Karen
Riley Avatar
January 27, 2009 at 3:43 PM
True to form and about the human experiance, good work. Judy Riley
Moreno Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 5:47 PM
I left you some soup mail, when you get a chance check it out...Raul
Burton Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 2:06 PM
Different kind of poetry which is always good. enjoyed reading this and have a blessed day.
Neal Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 3:43 PM
Wow, this is a good senryu. Keep writing. Love Elizabeth
Moreno Avatar
January 22, 2009 at 2:22 AM
The love you express is as deep as the ocean, Great job HG...Raul
Ginn Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 6:10 PM
With a very few words you spoke chapters. Laurie
Gorelick Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 4:00 PM
You'll be with her someday...hope your feeling better. Beeg
Winter Avatar
January 21, 2009 at 2:53 PM
It was written in the stars for you. Every write speaks of your everlasting love. Always powerfully beautiful. Love, Shar
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