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Eternal Vibrating Tones of Grace

Eternal Vibrating Tones of Grace Eternal dawn, nurturing womb, Hallowed pure catacomb Romantic heart of fragrant blooms Sparkling splendor enthroned Love from eternity Sacred vitality Hope's opportunity A heavenly wink from mercy's face Eternal vibrating tones of grace 2-3-22 Contest: Quietus (January 2022 Edition) Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker Syllable Counter HMS

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Valsa George

Date: 2/3/2022 7:36:00 PM

I am not at all familiar with this form . But I can say, the thoughts expressed here are lovely ! Everything is bestowed on us from Heaven ...Sam, great entry !

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/6/2022 6:25:00 PM

Hi Valsa. I am so happy you liked this poem. Agreed. It reminds me of the song from Godspell - All Good Things. The Quietus form was developed by Unseeking Seeker about six months ago. I have had fun with it. I think he lists the requirements in the contest details. Ho0pe you are well. Sending you blessings of all good things!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/3/2022 1:11:00 PM

I think he will love your splendid entry Sam. I am not quite sure how to write for this contest. This is beautiful! Blessings xxoo

Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/3/2022 1:23:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much Connie! I have to admit I agonized over the theme for the poem and its expression. Rewrote it several times. I hope you will lend your immense poetic gift to this contest! I know it will be specular! Will be looking for your entry dear friend. Hoping we both do well in the contest. Sending you the many blessings of a God wink! BTW - there is a wonderful book - When God Winks. Aloha. Ke Akua pu!