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Eternal Valentine

The number to celebrate is twenty-one, and how fast the years have gone. We started with chocolates and flowers, to prove the wonder of love’s power. Thereafter was perfume and gold, for a love that never grows old. Then it was sweet scented candles, and long romantic rambles. Then times grew tough, and love was enough. There was nothing left to prove, as love onwards moved. We had wonderful meals, and moments we had to steal. The love had no end, because we’re good friends. I no longer ask if you’ll be mine, my sweet eternal valentine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/15/2018 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Jacqueline.
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Date: 2/14/2018 11:47:00 PM
Well done, Jacqueline. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 2/14/2018 9:19:00 PM
Lovely, Jacqueline! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 2/14/2018 5:54:00 AM
The poem clearly shows the romantic side of love in this development and completion.
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Date: 2/14/2018 5:51:00 AM
Lovely poem for today. Regards Tom
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Date: 2/14/2018 4:43:00 AM
A beautiful Valentine poem...One that takes you through the years...Enjoyed it...Happy Valentine to both of you
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