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Eternal Slumber

Eternal Slumber The baby sleeps deep within Knows not of the coming affair. It dreams a dream never told Beyond the homely lair. Perfect, faultless every way Having not an imperfection. It slumbers ever through the day Knowing no direction. Peaceful, quiet far away Nestled snug beyond this Earth. Precious infant ever tiny Will never know its worth.

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Kevin Clark

Date: 10/21/2012 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your Win. I think God is a soul stealer. He takes babies sometimes because there souls are perfect no sin at all. Very well done

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2012 12:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Monique. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/15/2012 12:20:00 PM

Many congrats Monique on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/15/2012 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your Win friend Monique..Cheers!!

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/14/2012 8:08:00 PM

Oh, but it may know its worth. Nicely written, love your words you use. Well done Congratulations Lee

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2012 7:41:00 PM

MONIQUE, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/7/2012 5:54:00 PM

This poem is good enough to provoke anti-abortion activists. Good descriptiveness and rhyming.