Eternal Slumber

ETERNAL SLUMBER
I'm Serving Savory Sacrifices of Soulful Songs,
Soundly Singing psalms so Sonorously:
So-fa-mi-ra-do,
Sweet Songs on my lips Staples,
So far my radio
Shook so many Tables
Souls Scintillatingly Trembles
As feets, mouths and hands Dabbles
Soul-prayerfully we stand so strong like Jambuls
Making my Mumble Mockers go Bunkers,
Mayhem Magnanimously, Murderously Making More Moaners
Including the Stalkers, Scorners and Spoilers,
Inoculate my jesters into the sleep ocean.
Pollute their Motion & Intention with slumbering Potion
Because no fusion to be awaken in life's institution,
Now look at them in their slumbering execution,
They are even doing choreography sleep!
Lol...Sheepishly taken astray like a Shaded Sheep
To be slaughtered by bounded brainstorming breezes, blowing,
Bellowing, bringing bed-time bruises, bad buddies broken,
Shaken, Sailing Straight into Solitary Severe Sleep instead,
Eternally Entangled into Ephemeral Everlasting End.

VickWizzy
Vick Manuel Poetry {VMP}
Copyright© 31st December, 2019.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/13/2021 1:20:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem, and I'm particularly glad you wrote the last stanza to explain the metaphor. The last line, I think, is unnecessary. Particularly liked "camouflage of whispers hidden everywhere...."
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Date: 2/13/2021 1:14:00 PM
I'm think you had some good ideas for individual poems here, but the alliteration is overdone...just too cumbersome!
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Victor Immanuel
Date: 2/14/2021 4:24:00 AM
Thanks for reading and for your observation.
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