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Eternal Optimism

Good morning day light It is good to see you again You've brought with you a bright new day And the promise of things to come Eternal optimism comes with the light For today anything is possible Good evening night shade It is good to see you again You've brought with you a peaceful evening And the promise of dreams to come Eternal optimism comes with the night For tonight anything is possible Contest: STANDARD NO 120 Sponsored by: Brian Strand 9/29/18 `

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Line Gauthier

Date: 9/29/2018 6:22:00 AM

Lovely symmetry, Timothy. Strong message. The simplicity is divine and a FAVE.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/29/2018 1:06:00 PM

Thank you Miss Line. I fell in love with it too. It started with a simple thought that I had - "Good morning morning" it is amazing how poems develop.

Lyric Man

Date: 9/29/2018 3:48:00 AM

Love the positive energy in this work, Timothy. Day or night opportunity abounds and for the optimist.. and ultimately, success and peace!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/29/2018 3:54:00 AM

Thank you friend. You got it exactly right. Night can be an opportunity for some as day is for others.