Eternal Note

There's a song in my heart because you gave it the melody.
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Rose  Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Hang on to that melody dear friend, its the melody that will carry you home :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 7:23 AM
This is sweet. Hugs Rick.
J.T. Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 1:57 PM
Hey; good poem; God bless - JT
Thomas Avatar
January 31, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Justice. Hope you have been well over here :)
Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Congratulations on your win. "Amazing" Few words with much said. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............
Thomas Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Thanks so much Paula :)
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 10:47 AM
I find this fabulous!! Congrats.
Thomas Avatar
January 22, 2021 at 4:37 PM
I really appreciate that Andy thank you very much.
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Aw. This is so sweet. Absolutely adorable. And congrats on your placement in Line's contest, FJ! Music and Magic, Gershon
Thomas Avatar
January 17, 2021 at 11:30 AM
Thank you very much G :)
Allison Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 2:54 PM
oh so gorgeous Flo:-) I feel this poem could be extended into a lovely lyric maybe:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Thomas Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 5:13 PM
Thank you Highness ;)
Rose  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 12:31 PM
Without music the feet would never learn to dance, and the heart would never know the lyrics to a woven song of love. Beautifully penned my dear, thank you for sharing your light.
Thomas Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 5:13 PM
So very true Vie; thank you :)
Poetry Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 9:13 AM
Pure love FJ
Thomas Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:17 PM
Thanks TS :)
Krutsinger Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Such a beautiful poem in a mere 12 years. Great job!
Thomas Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 7:02 AM
Good morning Caren. Thank you very much.
Logan Avatar
January 13, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Some people make us feel like singing, other make us want to scream. Your person is a maestro to your heart.
Thomas Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 7:01 AM
Lol I have some screaming poems but they're much longer! Thanks Jenna ;)
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