Eternal Note

There's a song in my heart because you gave it the melody.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/21/2021 12:22:00 PM

Hang on to that melody dear friend, its the melody that will carry you home :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/27/2021 7:23:00 AM

This is sweet. Hugs Rick.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/30/2021 1:57:00 PM

Hey; good poem; God bless - JT

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/31/2021 10:58:00 AM

Thank you Justice. Hope you have been well over here :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/22/2021 2:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. "Amazing" Few words with much said. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/22/2021 4:38:00 PM

Thanks so much Paula :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2021 10:47:00 AM

I find this fabulous!! Congrats.

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/22/2021 4:37:00 PM

I really appreciate that Andy thank you very much.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/16/2021 8:32:00 PM

Aw. This is so sweet. Absolutely adorable. And congrats on your placement in Line's contest, FJ! Music and Magic, Gershon

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/17/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thank you very much G :)

Jan Allison

Date: 1/16/2021 2:54:00 PM

oh so gorgeous Flo:-) I feel this poem could be extended into a lovely lyric maybe:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/16/2021 5:13:00 PM

Thank you Highness ;)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/15/2021 12:31:00 PM

Without music the feet would never learn to dance, and the heart would never know the lyrics to a woven song of love. Beautifully penned my dear, thank you for sharing your light.

FJ Thomas
Date: 1/16/2021 5:13:00 PM

So very true Vie; thank you :)