Eternal Love

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They watched the glow of the sunset upon the love in their hearts As if every ending of the day was only just a start To their lives together, moving in the same bright, glow As what sets before them now, there is something they always know Their devotion is as strong as the blaze before their eyes The dreams they share together, reach this height in the sky Their love is eternal and there will never be a goodbye It has been this way since the day they were blessed and wed In the loving silence of the sunset, nothing needed to be said Heidi Sands 9/28/17

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2017 3:31:00 PM

wonderful celebration of love, heidi...sweetening my day!..huggs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2017 3:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Nette :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/29/2017 3:03:00 PM

What a beautiful write Heidi...enjoyed..and a fave

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2017 3:04:00 PM

Thanks so much Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed it and consider it a favorite :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/29/2017 6:54:00 AM

Aww, this is really sweet, romantic and lovely, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Jo :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/29/2017 4:40:00 AM

What a beautiful and emotionally set write my friend! You have passionately written a lovely poem here! I just feel the love between the two, and it brings up the love between me and my wife, true and forever! I really enjoyed reading your grandiose piece this morning! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/29/2017 8:40:00 AM

Thank you Russell :)