Eternal Love

Roses are red.
True love is rare.
My love for you is eternal
i swear.

Love is a battle.
not everyone wins.
but those who do
are freed from their sins.

Most of them don't get that far
as not everyone can jump over the wall.
All is fair in love and war.
but isn't love a war after all.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
December 4, 2024 at 1:02 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 8:55 PM
Piya, this is a beautiful poem. Well done.
A  Avatar
October 4, 2016 at 8:13 PM
Piya B, well done. skat
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