Eternal Love

How can one ever describe real love An all consuming ache for someone A feeling that's difficult to describe in words It defies cliches and interpretations In reality it captures the honest simplicity The basis of what life is about It's the best description anyone's come up with Plain and simple without a doubt When it finally happens, it's never a question Feelings deep down let's you know That this one's a keeper so hang on for dear life You're approaching the love plateau Where life for the first time has real meaning Finally everything falls into place From that point forward true happiness reigns Can't wipe the smile from your face The things that seemed so important before No longer have any urgency Down for the count, there's no turning back A love that lasts for eternity © Jack Ellison 2015
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Date: 2/19/2015 9:05:00 AM
Beautiful Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/19/2015 3:26:00 PM
Mushy eh! xoxox
Date: 2/12/2015 3:26:00 PM
You say it as it well is, Jack....when "Finally everything falls into place" true love is born...lasting for eternity. Blessed are those who find their eternal love! All the best my friend. // paul
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Date: 2/12/2015 3:28:00 PM
Very much appreciated my dear Pau! Thanks a bunch and all the best to you!
Date: 2/12/2015 11:22:00 AM
The first time I looked into little Dragons eyes I knew I was hooked... Then it took a few minutes to get my finger out of his mouth, and into trying to eat better things... Hubby was so romantic but was best at making me smile and laugh. I'd never give up any thing as precious and imaginative as him, at that... Love is all around us... In the Spring it's in the air... so every once in a while we add more critters for which, to care. Ah it's Valentines's Day soon. Already, Love is in the air.
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Date: 2/12/2015 12:51:00 PM
Love is everywhere... don't need to look very far! XOX
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