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Eternal Love

ETERNAL LOVE


Your eternal love
That morning to me you swore  
Lone spent I that night! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
  08 NOVEMBER 2013

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Mr King

February 12, 2014 at 4:49 AM

thanks! enjoyed it!

Harry Horsman

November 12, 2013 at 4:20 PM

A beautiful poem to ponder on,,,

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 12, 2013 at 4:33 PM

Thank you Harry, so nice to see you again!

Lucilla Carrillo

November 12, 2013 at 8:20 AM

Eternal love is a beautiful thing to have. some people are very lucky. from what I know - you are one of those lucky few. Many blessings always..... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 12, 2013 at 8:58 AM

You so kind and gentle , Lucy, thank you!

Richard Lamoureux

November 10, 2013 at 4:20 AM

I have been blessed with one of God's greatest tresures, my wife of twenty years. I have a feeling he has also been generous to you as well.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 10, 2013 at 5:35 AM

Oh, Yes, Richard, for twenty-five years! Thank you and God bless you even more!

Nette Onclaud

November 9, 2013 at 10:06 PM

a window to your sweet soul so vulnerable and somehow lost in the beauty of your mood... splndid job, D..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 10, 2013 at 2:12 AM

Should I learn to keep my...windows shut, my dear Nette? Ha-ha! Thank you very much for your very sweet comment!

Eileen Manassian

November 9, 2013 at 11:53 AM

My dear poet....who has not broken a promise at one time or another....yet...true love....loves on....Absolutely beautiful....as your soul!!!

Eileen Manassian

November 9, 2013 at 11:52 AM

My dear poet....who has not broken a promise at one time or another....yet...true love....loves on....Absolutely beautiful....as your soul!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 9, 2013 at 3:50 PM

Two comments my dear Eileen? That is wonderful! I have to thank you...twice for your good words! Yes, you are right true love never ends!

Richard Lamoureux

November 9, 2013 at 9:48 AM

Easy to make promises, hard to keep!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 9, 2013 at 3:47 PM

Absolutely right! Few, very few though can keep them as well! Thank you Richard for your visit!

Delysia Hendricks

November 9, 2013 at 8:21 AM

Awww, the lady is fickle and foolish. Love is not to be bandied about lightly, especially if sworn to be of the eternal sort. I hope your weekend is a good one, my friend. Licia :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 11, 2013 at 4:41 AM

You are so right my, dear Licia, hope all ladies and gentlemen know it! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

November 8, 2013 at 10:47 AM

This has a sad ring to it..Enjoyed reading your creativity..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 9, 2013 at 1:04 AM

Well, yes, it had a sad ring but brought something beautiful too: A new opportunity! Thank you so much Sara, for your cordial visit!

Andrea Dietrich

November 8, 2013 at 9:34 AM

Bittersweet one. As Mystic rose said, three lines can tell a whole story.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 9, 2013 at 1:02 AM

I think all of us had moments like that but this is life and we have to accept it otherwise we suffer! Thank you Andrea for your amiable visit!

Kiran Bantawa

November 8, 2013 at 6:46 AM

I'd call it a senryu poem, anyway a nice poem.

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 8, 2013 at 6:51 AM

Thank you, Dear Kiran, for your visit, your comment and your expertise! For me it is just a poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 8, 2013 at 4:24 AM

- Beautiful haiku, a pleasure to read - Have a nice weekend Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 8, 2013 at 5:23 AM

Thank you my good friend, Anne Lise! Have a nice weekend too! Why I have the feeling that weekends you spent in the countryside?

Russell Sivey

November 8, 2013 at 4:15 AM

This is an incredible love Haiku my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis

November 8, 2013 at 5:21 AM

My friend Russell, I think we all have found ourselves in that position, some of us, more than once! Thank you for your kind and gracious comments!