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Eternal Love

ETERNAL LOVE Your eternal love That morning to me you swore Lone spent I that night! © Demetrios Trifiatis 08 NOVEMBER 2013

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Mr King

Date: 2/12/2014 4:49:00 AM

thanks! enjoyed it!

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/12/2013 4:20:00 PM

A beautiful poem to ponder on,,,

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2013 4:33:00 PM

Thank you Harry, so nice to see you again!

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 11/12/2013 8:20:00 AM

Eternal love is a beautiful thing to have. some people are very lucky. from what I know - you are one of those lucky few. Many blessings always..... Lucy

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/12/2013 8:58:00 AM

You so kind and gentle , Lucy, thank you!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/10/2013 4:20:00 AM

I have been blessed with one of God's greatest tresures, my wife of twenty years. I have a feeling he has also been generous to you as well.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2013 5:35:00 AM

Oh, Yes, Richard, for twenty-five years! Thank you and God bless you even more!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/9/2013 10:06:00 PM

a window to your sweet soul so vulnerable and somehow lost in the beauty of your mood... splndid job, D..:) huggs

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/10/2013 2:12:00 AM

Should I learn to keep my...windows shut, my dear Nette? Ha-ha! Thank you very much for your very sweet comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/9/2013 11:53:00 AM

My dear poet....who has not broken a promise at one time or another....yet...true love....loves on....Absolutely beautiful....as your soul!!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/9/2013 11:52:00 AM

My dear poet....who has not broken a promise at one time or another....yet...true love....loves on....Absolutely beautiful....as your soul!!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 3:50:00 PM

Two comments my dear Eileen? That is wonderful! I have to thank you...twice for your good words! Yes, you are right true love never ends!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2013 9:48:00 AM

Easy to make promises, hard to keep!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 3:47:00 PM

Absolutely right! Few, very few though can keep them as well! Thank you Richard for your visit!

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 11/9/2013 8:21:00 AM

Awww, the lady is fickle and foolish. Love is not to be bandied about lightly, especially if sworn to be of the eternal sort. I hope your weekend is a good one, my friend. Licia :-)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/11/2013 4:41:00 AM

You are so right my, dear Licia, hope all ladies and gentlemen know it! Thank you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2013 10:47:00 AM

This has a sad ring to it..Enjoyed reading your creativity..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 1:04:00 AM

Well, yes, it had a sad ring but brought something beautiful too: A new opportunity! Thank you so much Sara, for your cordial visit!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/8/2013 9:34:00 AM

Bittersweet one. As Mystic rose said, three lines can tell a whole story.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/9/2013 1:02:00 AM

I think all of us had moments like that but this is life and we have to accept it otherwise we suffer! Thank you Andrea for your amiable visit!

Kiran Bantawa

Date: 11/8/2013 6:46:00 AM

I'd call it a senryu poem, anyway a nice poem.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2013 6:51:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Kiran, for your visit, your comment and your expertise! For me it is just a poem!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2013 4:24:00 AM

- Beautiful haiku, a pleasure to read - Have a nice weekend Demetrios. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2013 5:23:00 AM

Thank you my good friend, Anne Lise! Have a nice weekend too! Why I have the feeling that weekends you spent in the countryside?

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2013 4:15:00 AM

This is an incredible love Haiku my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2013 5:21:00 AM

My friend Russell, I think we all have found ourselves in that position, some of us, more than once! Thank you for your kind and gracious comments!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/8/2013 4:11:00 AM

Hahaha, the theme is rather in between senryu and haiku

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/8/2013 5:18:00 AM

Dr. Ram, my ignorance is of such magnitude that wouldn't discern the difference! Thank you for visiting and commenting, you always welcome!