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A poem written in simple English which I can understand and write.

It's being with you, and thinking of no one else. It's looking at each other in eyes, and getting lost in each other's thoughts. It's holding hands and strolling on the beach, and not even noticing the beautiful waves. Its indescribable love written on your beautiful face, It's undiscovered joy in your sensuous smile, It's uncontrollable lust in your close embrace, It's endless desire in your deep beautiful eyes. It's a painted mural in my heart, Its inscriptions can't be erased with your loss, if it ever gets repainted with a substitute love, it's engravings always remain intact in my soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 9/3/2023 3:15:00 AM
Wonderful. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2023 11:47:00 AM
Heartfelt, tender and sincere, A beautifully romantic poem Jay, well done
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Date: 9/1/2023 10:19:00 AM
- A lovely couple ... in a romantic picture ... beautifully written, Jay :) - hugs
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