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Eternal Life

Eternal life

I’m wandering around thoughts
Nothing matched
Blend no
Joy and sorrow
Comes together
Live on earth’s meaningless
What’s the purpose
To seek eternal life
One says
From where
A temple, Church or Kovil
Thus in our own heart
Ever young soul
@Sunil Algama November 10, 2013

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Date: 11/11/2013 8:31:00 AM
This one's nice, Sunil! Welcome to poetrysoup. All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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Sunil Algama
Date: 11/13/2013 9:05:00 AM
Thank you very much Arden
Date: 11/10/2013 10:07:00 PM
Sunil, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Sunil Algama
Date: 11/13/2013 9:07:00 AM
Hello, I'm from Srilanka and Admin of "English Poets" and "english Writers' on FB Thank you very much for your comment Skat
Date: 11/10/2013 7:53:00 AM
good morning Sunil,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sunil Algama
Date: 11/13/2013 9:08:00 AM
Thaank you very much Poet Destroyer
Date: 11/10/2013 6:38:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sunil ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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