Eternal Life

Eternal life

I’m wandering around thoughts
Nothing matched
Blend no
Joy and sorrow
Comes together
Live on earth’s meaningless
What’s the purpose
To seek eternal life
One says
From where
A temple, Church or Kovil
Thus in our own heart
Ever young soul
@Sunil Algama November 10, 2013
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Gopela Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 8:31 AM
This one's nice, Sunil! Welcome to poetrysoup. All the best my souper-friend! Love,love,love! :-) - Den
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November 13, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Thank you very much Arden
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November 10, 2013 at 10:07 PM
Sunil, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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November 13, 2013 at 9:07 AM
Hello, I'm from Srilanka and Admin of "English Poets" and "english Writers' on FB Thank you very much for your comment Skat
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November 10, 2013 at 7:53 AM
good morning Sunil,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Algama Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 9:08 AM
Thaank you very much Poet Destroyer
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November 10, 2013 at 6:38 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Sunil ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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