Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

Eternal Flame

Quote: The ability to harness fire lives in all humans. 
Explore it, and you will understand its importance 
Nourish its flame and it will always keep you alive.
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The fire that burns within me is my soul's town crier  
like the stars and the moon hungering for night's pyre 
I too hunger for the flames of love's passionate desire 

I am a blaze of light sparking like a matchstick to a fire 
when I'm at the steeple I cannot climb any higher  
I become an eternal flame, a majestic vast empire.


Feb 25, 2023
Sponsor	Joe Maverick
Contest Name	Which fire is eternal

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Vijay Pandit February 26, 2023 at 5:48 AM Passionate and powerful--I hear your message, Vienna.

Victor Buhagiar February 26, 2023 at 2:23 AM A commendable poem where pure love makes it worth living. Hugs.

Aysha Nuwas February 25, 2023 at 11:12 PM a passionate poem for sure, beautiful!

Yann Rolland February 25, 2023 at 6:37 PM beautiful idea for bringing fire like Prometeus ? love the beauty of words and conclusion, have a nice sunday yann

Michelle Faulkner February 25, 2023 at 5:11 PM Wow, this is stunning, so evocative of power and passion, especially love the last line 'a majestic vast empire' - best wishes for the contest~

Stephan McBride February 25, 2023 at 3:24 PM In speaking of the angels he says, “He makes his angels spirits, and his servants flames of fire.” Hebrews 1:7 NIV Love your poem my friend, very inspiring and insightful, May God bless, comfort, guide and fill you with His peace, love, spirit and joy in abundance : )